Reviews for The Spoiled Cinderella
anoymous chapter 3 . 10/30/2012
Ooooh nice! I love how you made the lines of dialogue extra witty in here!
Anoymous chapter 2 . 10/30/2012
Eh, nice! And I hate Cinderella now! Actually, I used to love them around 5-6, then I kind of grew out of them and was netural about them until I hit my tweens, when I realized that Cinderella is one of the biggest b****'s i've ever seen!

Seriously, all she cares about is her looks and her hair, and she's so vain! She's always complaining and moaning about her loving stepmothers and stepsisters who took her in, give her wearable clothes, a roof over her head and enough food to keep her well norished. I think she DOES need a jolly good kick in the butt, and she should go on World's strictest parents and get properly disciplined.

Oops I'm rambling, sorry.

Onto more relevant things, I love your story, and I'm beginning to like and empathize with the main character here, and I'm looking forward to reading about her romance with the guard!
Anoymous chapter 1 . 10/30/2012
Hey, I like this prologue and I do actually have an account in fanfiction, but I just couldn't be bothered to log in, sorry :/

Anyway, this story sounds good so far, I'll look ofrward to reading it!
monkey chapter 1 . 3/13/2005
mmkay. i've evened out your review #. rn't u happy. : - D
the-Wake-just-after-Midnight chapter 4 . 8/2/2004
several months late, I know. But whatever! you should be rewarded with complements! (I can't Spell! YAY!)
Silver Bullet Girl chapter 13 . 7/17/2004
That was great! Fabulous, magical, ROMANTIC! YAY!

Wonderful! I have not time to be sarcastic however, my dad is about to ring my neck because I've been online for so long. Great story, Gotta fly!

Silver Bullet Girl

Ps. Cool name!
Silver Bullet Girl chapter 10 . 7/17/2004
That's right, this is where I stopped reading and started wishing I could read.

NOW I CAN!
Silver Bullet Girl chapter 5 . 7/17/2004
This is a great story!

I read the frirst few chapters of it a while back, when it wasn't done. Then our computer got a virus and I couldn't use the thing anymore.

So you got it done? YES!
ajaliebe chapter 13 . 6/23/2004
this was fantastic!
LythTaeraneth chapter 13 . 4/22/2004
I love you! *sob* I am so glad I took up babysitting, now I can use the internet, even if MY provider is a b*! Great story! I look forward to more from you in the future!
annegirl1324 chapter 13 . 3/30/2004
Great story! So great I didn't review before this! I love Cinderella stories and I have to say this is one of the most original ones I've ever read! Write another one!
SumiFritzN chapter 11 . 3/17/2004
I like it! One question. How can she run in glass shoes? I mean, wasn't it hard enough to walk through the street with them on, without craking them? Oh well. I can use my imagination. ANYways... I really like this story, so please please update it soon! (I'm a hypocrite, oh well) :)
Silver Bullet Girl chapter 10 . 1/23/2004
An awesome story that absaloutly RULES and isn't too short to read and I love your writing skill!Besides Ethan is a great name [I can't help but picture him a total hottie] and that was a cool way to tie in the name Cinderella!
wishing I had your writing skill-
Silver Bullet Girl
EvenSong chapter 10 . 1/17/2004
Oh! Don't stop THERE! Update SONN!
Me Acorn and Somtimes Banana chapter 10 . 1/13/2004
O... I can't wait! I love Ethan...*sighs dreamily and stares into space* I can only say that your only fault is that you havn't updated yet.
P.S. Thanks for reviewing!
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