| Reviews for Hoenn League: A Brendan and May Adventure |
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  Guest chapter 65 . 8/25/2018 DAH LETTAH |
| Guest chapter 48 . 8/22/2018 Team Aqua admin Wally challenges you! Brendan uses Hatred Punch! Wally fainted! |
 Sereii chapter 65 . 3/6/2018 I'm not crying, I'm not crying, I'm nOT CRYING, I'M NOT CRYING, I'M NOT CR |
| Sereii chapter 49 . 3/5/2018 Whoo! Sootopolis! Favorite city! |
| Sereii chapter 24 . 3/4/2018 Spoiler Alert to people who haven't gotten to chapter 20-something yet. I'm actually am on Brendan's side on this one. May's being a little bit too sensitive. But hey. Also, I smell some Wally coming up :3 |
| Sereii chapter 16 . 3/4/2018 Jealous Brendan is best Brendan. |
| MikeV1 chapter 1 . 12/4/2017 I've seen this story a few times scrolling through the site, but never really sat down to read it. I like it a lot so far! I really enjoy your writing style and the way you portray the characters. Everyone's got a bit of personality, even the lesser ones like the moms! I'm also enjoying May's laidback, chill, kind of not caring attitude towards everything. |
| Commando2341 chapter 9 . 8/27/2017 Like fuck am I reading a triangle. Bye. |
| Guest chapter 46 . 7/17/2017 I reviewed once but after rereading it...why are yhe pokemon almost human in their level of talking? I can understand the communication to an extent but their having massive in depth conversations which is VERY different then what they have been able to do in the past? Also the story is kind of ridiculous where muddy didnt want to use earthquake because he could hurt flare? Actually its down right bad so ia he afraid in everybattle to fight other pokemon? Hes a massive swampert using mud shot, or muddy water on a pokemon like say a bird pokemon could kill it, or god forbid he use a water move on a charmader or one of its evolutions they die if their goes out? Whats the ppint in even being a trainer if hes afraid to attack? This has been a good stort up to this chapter not tryong to be harsh but this was way below what previous chapters have been for how characters actually talk, and ghe overall realism of the show |
| Guest chapter 46 . 7/17/2017 Im not sure if it was the writing but...wtf is wrong with muddy his entire personality is well wrong. Also why is everyone being an ass to brendan because he was upset over silver dying? Am I the only person who thought it was sweet that he went jn the ocean to get hia body? Its messed up how muddy was acting, like real messed up. Then silver comes oit of no where and suddenly brendan is the bad guy for missing him? The only thing that was strange was why brendan asked muddy why it wasnt muddy who died instead of silver. Overall its just kinda stupid seeing as how the story has been progressing. |
| Guest chapter 12 . 7/14/2017 I understand the fight was rigged for may to win but jesus your telling me a torchick was able to take a tackle attack from poochyana, a watergun from marshtomp and not go down? And on top of that it evolved and then took a a watergun and 2 mudshots plus a tackle? This is hilariously bad what level is flare like level 80? Thats the only way thia fight made even a little sense. |
| AerodynamicZ chapter 56 . 4/27/2017 Like Uber bitchy |
| AerodynamicZ chapter 56 . 4/27/2017 May is so bitchy damn we luv her tho but she's a bitch |
| AerodynamicZ chapter 53 . 4/27/2017 whorephanage |
| AerodynamicZ chapter 53 . 4/27/2017 Wally upheld rule 273 of the bro code, the most ignored rule in the entire archive. |
