Cool fic!
Borys

Obi is not the 21st.
It is impossible for only 21 JEDI in general to leave over a thousand years.
That number must be of either 20 MASTERS or 20 Jedi Council members.
Think - a thousand years ...
Borys

Nice.
I like that Obi had to pay for keeping Jinn alive.
Borys

Typical angst author fiat bs that all stories like this are. Doesn’t do anything but nope so hard that I can hardly read this craaaapppppd. Honestly why even right this if it’s just the same try and hide in angst but eventually tell everything to his master/council bs that is already all over this site?.

But what should I do? lol not characterization of I i wan author fiat bs for your op OC Mary Sue

This fan fiction story is amazing! It's so interest and captivating, I will always remember your story

I cried.

I'm fangirling so hard right now i never thought i'd be so freakin' weird. Making seal noises and dying whale ones...I'm laughing so hard at myself right now.

I'M LOVING THE STORY!

You clearly have good taste. For one, you like star wars (you are great at writing star wars fics too) But also, you like Queen enough ti quote innuendo.

Hmm. This seems so...cynical. I could see Obi-wan being cynical, but not to this extent, mainly because he was so relaxed around Luke in ANH. I'd like to see where you go with this, but I'm doubting that will happen, seeing as it's been, what...six years since you updated. ; Well, FYI, it was an interesting piece, and thank you for not taking it down. :)

And what, pray tell, is in it for Tarius? That's the Million Credit question. I'm curious as to why Obi-wan hasn't asked it yet: What's in it for him (Tarius)?

Obi-wan, you're "The Negotiator"! You should know better than that! Ask what KIND of pain! Physical? Emotional? Get more of a picture before you agree to anything! BAKA! *smacks him up the side of the head*

However, this is far more along the lines of time-travel for Obi-wan than any other fic I've read. I mean, if he's going to go back in time, it would make sense that he would do so at the end of his life, not sometime in the middle (otherwise, can we say "bye bye Luke", he'd be killed by storm troopers and everything we know would be moot, of course the fics techinically make it all moot anyway, but that's besides the point). I would like to know exactly who this dark-haired guy is...I don't like him. Hmm. Quite intrigued.

Great story! Still hold out for an update

Taking the force from Obi-wan was cruel for the sake of being angsty.

Writers no longer have talent on this site for Angst is the easiest and now most exaggerated emotion written.

Oh, much loved. Absolutely amazing story. I love how you get into the older Obi-Wan's Head(I'll call the older version Ben).

It's interesting to read, since I barely remember 4, 5, and 6. I'm really hoping one day GL will write 7, 8, and 9. It'll have to be about a Jedi order reformation. You hit a little bit on what I'm thinking about in this fic. Again, much liked. Are you going to continue this fic?

Keep writing!