Neat.. :) Good start so far. Very awesome, as well as very well-written, too. I like it — especially the part about “English class” and how it’s seen from Yugi’s perspective to be “lots of work”. This is saying something right there, as Yugi is usually said to be the type to play games and have fun.

Of course, another reason why I like the scene in English class is because I find it to be a good setting for the beginning of the story, too.. :)

Anyway, keep up your superneat, very phenomenal and beautifully creative writing.. :)

I love this story! It took me a year to find this again! A YEAR!
Matches: gggrrrraaaa! *shacks green scaley head* 'pet dragon, free for any one to use in story'
Yugi: yeah...a long lonely year... :(
Me: aaaw dont be sad yugi! *Whispers* Wheres vampire yami when you need him? *to joey*
Joey: *shurugs shoulders*

Will yugi fall for yami and vice versa
Will bakura meet ryou

PLZZZZZZZZZZZ! DON'T KILL YAMI OR YUGI!

IKR! It sounds better, I guess. Great job!

well then, i was expecting Seto to be introduced as a vampire first but Bakura seems ok.

MORE! Plz! I know you haven't updated in 10 years, but plz!

AWESOME!

HELLO NEXT CHAPTER

wanting more

Real good! Please do more chapters soon?!

Really very, very cool! Please continue soon?! Great work!

Very cool! In the chapter where Yugi reads his report to the class, how about the teacher thinks is all faked but to prove her and the class wrong he lets Yami the vampire come into the classroom to prove everyone wrong to show that vampires are real?! Just an idea, great work and please update soon?

I knew it was gonna be Bakura.

Interesting