Reviews for As In Autumn
thecagedsong chapter 1 . 2/18/2017
I wasn't sure what to expect from the description, but it certainly wasn't something this beautiful and this haunting. Nothing could have prepared me for something this beautiful. It's one of those stories that makes the writer as they reread their own work. What really got me were the "somewhere" sections. You really know how to take out a girl's heart, you know that? Thank you for writing this.
HyenaYu chapter 1 . 4/11/2016
Wow yeah..I cried too. So emotional. :'(
readingnotes chapter 1 . 8/4/2015
Wonderfully, beautifully written!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/29/2014
Oh my god you had me in tears with that one. You are such a great writer and the way you are able to capture all the different emotions is amazing. That was heart wrenching but so incredibly beautiful at the same time. Well done and thank you for sharing your amazing stories.
swirlblaze chapter 1 . 11/19/2013
heart wrenching. poignant cant even begin to describe this. slightly confusing at first but oh how you've ripped out my fan girl heart in a most terrible (but still somehow good) way. this is absolutely beautiful. one of the best i've read, hands up hands down. not something i would ponder upon but the beauty in death that you've captured is staggering. the depth of their emotions and love. absolutely. wow. thank you.
suumelo-onigiri48 chapter 1 . 9/12/2013
This was absolutely beautiful. Fabulous job.
WifeofPhantomhive chapter 1 . 6/5/2013
I really cried *sniff* *'sniff* I like it it is a good story
Guest chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
*Stands up and applauds* I loved it! I cried like you have no f*****g idea! This is so very well written. I even felt emotions in my chest as they died but still found each other. So much meaning and emotions in this! You have a very bright future in writing. Just please don't stop writing!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
*Stands up and applauds* I cried like you have no f*****g idea! I love it! And this is very well written. you may have a very bright future in writing. I even felt pain in my chest when they died. T-T
KellyZipcode chapter 1 . 3/18/2011
This is, hands down, the most beautiful, heart-breaking story I've ever read.

I never really put much thought into the deaths of Serenity and Endymion since their story lasted so long, and that caused them to seem almost immortal. Of course, I'm not dense enough to think they wouldn't die eventually. Anyways, back to the actual review.

At the very beginning, I was confused about the format. I didn't realize the dividers signaled a shift between the AUs. I caught on though, so you must have done something right. And that's about it when it comes to constructive criticism. Now, for the praise.

Had I not been in a dorm room with thin walls, I would have been sobbing. I used 4 tissues total. Every divider brought on a new wave of hysterics and I very frequently found myself cursing the world for allowing something so tragically beautiful to exist.

I honestly don't know which story was more heart-wrenching. Probably Endymion's because of the waiting he had to do. Ahhh, but Serenity having to witness the deaths of the senshi! I can't decide.

I loved the repetition with the bedroom and how you frequently mentioned specific events from times past. It really brought a reminiscent tone to the piece. And dear lord, that ROSE. I died. So sad.

And how they only used Mamo-chan and Usako in private? Lovely. Don't even get me started on the morning tradition and their parting words. My tears have just dried up and I'd prefer not to run out of tissues (although I'm grateful for getting the chance to clear up my sinuses).

Longest review ever written.

But also the best story I've ever read on here.

I hope you read this.
shetan83 chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
Okay... I teared up.
Luthien Morgon chapter 1 . 5/23/2010
oh my god. That was so beautiful. I loved it.
Megan chapter 1 . 3/8/2010
Wow, I'm not sure that I can find words to do this piece justice. Quite possibly the most beautiful piece of writing I've read, and that is saying something. It is heartbreaking, and I can't decide which story I loved most. You are a very talented writer and I'm only sorry I haven't discovered your stories sooner. Kudos to you for an amazing fic xo
LadySelene0630 chapter 1 . 3/4/2010
This was by far the most heartwrenching yet most beautiful ending to lives of Queen Serenity and King Endymion. And even after death they still managed to find one another. I love it. This is an excellent story.
DeLaLunaLove chapter 1 . 2/10/2010
great story
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