Wow... that was powerful! I liked how it switched viewpoints, and how David is able to understand Freefall.

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Excellent oneshot! I loved your descriptions, and particularly how you described everyone's thoughts and feelings. I really really liked your retelling of the flight and David's conversation with Freefall. I would love to hear more on this from you!

Thank you very much for reviewing my story. To be honest, I am quite fond of your works with the skybax and particularly David's thoughts in First Flight. I'm very sorry about the long wait aswell, Holidays tend to be hectic. Keep up the good work and Fly High.

Amazing! you are a master writer i love ever bit of this story, you should make a sequel. Maby the night at the nest or everythin fron Freefall point of view.

great fic... i absolutely loved it...
it was well written, and
David is my favoritest character!

Nothing can say how good this is, i loved it from start to finish.

Wow, I really like the different points of view in this story. I never knew Freefall was a pteradon? I always thought he was a skybax. Ah well you learn something knew everyday!

The story was very good and well written, but your misused of passed when you meant past made me nutty.

its ok, but i surgest u read the books to learn more about Skybacks riding. well written.