So sad. I feel for both of them, esp. Sirius.

Oh wow. So many emotions.
I know that Remus went through a lot during those 12 years, but he shouldn't be almost making fun of Sirius. What Sirius went through was far worse in my opinion. If Sirius would only tell Remus what happened to him in Azkaban, maybe Remus would understand better.
Lovely chapter - very curious to see how this all plays out.

Oh, poor Sirius.

Lovely!

This was a good story :)

this was so good! I can' wait for you to update!

Are you crazy? How is this a "dry" chapter. In my opinion, it's the best one yet!

This line is really beautiful: "He kissed each eye lid, thin and delicate with exhaustion, softer then the petals of flowers..."

It's really strange cuz I usually only read fics in their Hogwarts years, but I actually really like this!

And like I said, if you still don't have a beta, I'm eager to help.

hello.

I love this fic. I was not planning on reviewing until I got to the last chapter, but at the end you asked if you could have someone beta. Though I know this was posted a while ago and you may have found someone already, but I am completely willing since I love the pairing and I love editing my friends' work anyways. My email is if you need anything.

I have a question for you though, grammatically: I'm American and I presume that you are British since you do "colour" instead of "color" and "realise" instead of "realize". You also, however, write "patients" instead of "patience" and I actually checked in the dictionary but the dictionary I have has the American uses. Do you know if they're interchangeable? Strange question, I'm sure. BUt I'm just curious. hehe. .

Uh...please tell me this hasn't been abandoned? IT'S TOO GOOD TO LET DIE! *sob*

This is a wonderful story! I hope you haven't given up on it, because I would love to read more. Your interactions between Sirius and Remus, and Snape and Remus are beautifully written, and the whole story is heart-wrenching. Please update.

I like it. You fixed the typos in the later chapters, though I'm not sure about the whole friendly Snape/Lupin thing, but I dont recall reading anywhere that this was canon so you can do what you want.

Merry/Happy Christmas

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Hey there! Good story you've got goin' here, hope you haven't abandoned it, I really like it! _

Love the new chapter - great to have this perspective!

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nice.

i cant wait for more!

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WOW! Thats a hecka of a lot of insight into Remus and Snapes relashions, lol, i'd almost thing Severous CARES...and can i just say:

what a wonderful way to tell remus' side of the tale, now that he'd seen the horror that was sirius' time, remus' is ethched in pain, and coated in melancholy, too. I can see remus his flat humor, half joke, half serious, to serious for his still young face...scruffy, lol, now that makes for an interesting image!