Bah, update update update update!

Just finished reading this thing, took a hole friggin hour, i wanna read more.

Great chapter - way to lay on the mystery.

funny how when you least want it to trouble always pops up. great story looking forward to your next chapter.

I seem to recall going through moments exactly like that at her age ... poor Janna, to be both a teen and a superhero - I guess the guy who created Spider-Man was right.

Great chapter, you've got both Janna and Xander down pat.

yes! i've been searching for something worth reading on this site for a good long while now. i think i ran through them all pretty fast. your writing is clear and the characterizations of Xander and the 'rebellious young teenager going through some major changes' are excellent. the conversations are interesting and attention grabbing. i look forward to continuing this story.

great story looking forward to your next chapter.

I have this strange feeling that Janna's choice in dates is going to be no luckier than Buffy's was ...

Loved this story of Janna the Vampire Slayer. Xander is great in this and it was also good to see Giles and Oz. Janna comes off pretty well.

great story looking forward to your next chapter.

This remains one of the better post-Chosen stories I've read: You've created a rich universe of your own, not only in the "new" Xander but in your original characters and situations. Great read.

"Stodgy old Xander"? Hilarious. This reads so much like what a spin-off series about a new slayer would be like, it's almost like seeing it on the screen. Janna's one of the better new slayer characters I've come across.

I've just come across your story, and really enjoyed it. Xander seems so grown up, but that's what happens when you suddenly find yourself responsible for young slayers, I suppose. I've wondered what would happen when a watcher comes for a slayer who's living with a full set of parents, and your'e doing a good job of answering that question.

Just came across your story and it's quickly gotten me hooked. Your descriptions and scenarios are so vivid to read. Great work! I hope you continue with your writing soon.

- LEIGH (aka Newly Human)

good story looking forward to your next chapter.

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