Continuuee... ;;

A bit vague in terms of a timeline and annoying in the sense that everyone choses to turn alcoholic rather than sit down and figure things out, but really good overall. Thank you for all your hard work.

er...it's not exactly like the guy has proof, or that anyone would listen to him. and jack could easily just kill him so...don't see where the problem is. will needs to get his head out of his *&& though just be with jack.

AH! you must finish! oh no!

ahh! norrington.

i hate norrington.

okay. that's it.

Brilliant. I'd love to see what happens next. There should be updates, darn it!

holy.

this story's fantabulous!jack/will all the way!you two are terrific writers!

rock on.

::My Life Craves Pirates::

How can you end it right i hope there is more please be more i LOVE this story so very gripping

hey, hey, hey. where's more story? hmpf. could you email me when you do update? i think i like this story.

and you sur like ani! naming the bar 'the little plastic castle'. heh.

i knew i knew that song fom the first line of it, but i couldnt place it. i could hear ever note in my head cause ive heard it so many tiomes, but i just couldnt remember it was ani until a few seconds ago. its frustrating.

great story. fun so far. ill keep reading. immediatly. great job. both of you.

oh why oh why did you stop this fic? it was going very well, you both kept will and jack in character very well. it's a pity you haven't written anything for about a year this is very interesting with lots of plot twists. the interactions between the characters were wonderful. i hope you will eventually continue this.

cool

Very nice, minor confusion as to where they are... but all in all a lovely read, please update soon!
~Marron-chan

That's really good! I like how you alternate etween the two characters...

Are you ever going to update? It'll be nice if you use "Served Faithfully" as the next song :)

ai! This was updated to long ago! Me wanty more! It be good!