Alright alright
Whos gonna adopt these fics
Some one has to
The question is who
Im still trying to start up my own account, and seeing as how I'm struggling writing my own stories, I would not be the right person
So who will take this mans mantle
Please speak up

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I was really enjoying this story, and the others, and am sorry to see you may not continue them.

I won't promise I'll finish it, but I would like to at least look at the outline for Draw Me Close if no one else has asked for it and begun writing. If someone has, I'd like to ask for a link to their continuation if you have it.

Good lick in all you strive to accomplish.

D.A.

pretty good, keep it up

hey men this fic is fantastic i mean how you put it in whit rei having all of the memoris of rei 1 and rei 2 and also misato heping and investigating about seele and all the other things is trully ginus and i think that i speak for all the other readers PLEASE UPDATE SON. And thank for a grat fic. so please put up the other chapters as soon as posible.

then please update

update

Yes, you must continue! This is a great story! Very romantic and I like that between Shinji and Rei.

Need to have them kiss thought. And screw with Gendo, make him suffer!

Anyway, keep up the good work!

Yea-good story hope to see another chapter soon.

DC

This seems like a nice story it’s interesting how you have handled Rei.

DC

I can't wait for the next chapter!

u didnt update 4 3 years and this wasnt that long, u nitwitted baka

Your dialogue needs work. Otherwise, your structure is sound.

But your dialogue...when you write, think of it as you having a conversation with someone...and what it would sound like to say those things out loud.

The way it is right now...your story line is very good, your descriptive writing is very good, and your structure is excellent.

But your character dialogue is so poor, I lost interest almost immediately.

Good work.

this fic is over do for an update please up do it soon