I’m really confused is FanFiction not working? I’m only seeing a few words here and there and sometimes a sentence or two? Is that how u wrote it or again is it just me?

Um is it just me or does the bottom part of the chapter only show percentage signs? Was there supposed to be dialogue there? Was it on purpose? Or it just my phone that’s doing it?

How the hell did they do that...

AHAHA ANKO teasing INO is hilarious LOL

HOLY SHIT IT'S TURNING SUPER INTERESTING XDD

Just commenting on this dead fic to say that I loved it! Especially chapter 23 with Hinata, it was almost unbearibly cute, especially her swearing!

And more I liked this fic a lot because of how diffirent it is. Its feel is completely unique and that is something I can really appreciate. I like this Sakura to, and you constructed a believable reason for her personality to.

In short I loved it!

I love this story

oh my gosh i'm laughing hahahahahhha
Hinata swearing is like a kid swearing for the first time
Honest to goodness my favorite part in this chapter.
uh I know this story's ancient I mean its been 10 years but damn I need to know more
hahahha
I usually dont comment, only onthe latest chap but this story is just so good I had to write something
From the very beginning I was hooked and as I read more I loved every line of it.

oh my god she can imbue things with her personality and awareness, that is ridiculous especially if it can apply directly to elements, it's like the kage bunshin plus henge but taken up to 11

I will point out that a lot of those chakra exercises have surprising combat potential

This fic is still great dude

Holy moly, that dream from Anko punched me right in the guys!
I did not expect this development at all, and I LOVE IT!

usually I like to get caught up in a fic before reviewing, but this chapter was just too good to pass up.

Lol the twist. She can probably sell merchandise like that lol Sakura dolls line of merchandise . The konoha equiv of Barbie dolls.

Though it might be useful. Imagine she has need of a new kidney ... all she has to do is inject a doner with chakra and it might increase her compatibility with it.

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Lol the peeping Toms . Poor Sakura .

Too bad jiraiya hasn't appeared . He'd probably have strangled kakashi for losing such an icha icha yuri edition protagonist worthy student .

Though if Kurenai had been like that Hiashi and her relatives might have paired more attention to her training sessions . Since apparently she had no compunctions with sleeping with fathers.

Nice bonding scene . Hmm I wonder who would have more of an aneurysm of the sudden closeness later kiba or Kurenai.