I don't know who Shinzon and Isis are and I have no idea what is happening in this story. Maybe that's because I never saw Nemesis.

The formatting looks fine to me.

So what happened to your sequel?

Sensual, moving, sexy, passionate, all those things appeared when I read this story. I thought I was the only one who loves Shinzon but after reading many stories of that dreamy character, it's made my day brighter. I really liked this, it will be remembered forever.

Great story! I'm not the least bit offended. As creepy as it may sound, I identify with Shinzon, and thus love the idea of there being hope and a bright future for him. While watching "Nemesis", I kept thinking that if anything could heal Shinzon, it would be the love of a woman. Thanks for the refreshing break from the overly dualistic bad-guys-deserve-to-die-and-get-blown-up mentality!

Will love to read the follow-up Shinzon and Isis fic Swing Time. Where do you intend to grace us mortals with it. I can't wait to read it. Great work. ;P

Always room for romance :-) is there more? Pleez. Shinzon ... *sigh* ...

BRAVO! BRAVO!

I enjoyed this story very much! It may be short, but it is one of the best Shinzon fics that I have read here! *the others are Siberia's. Twainy's and MadHatter's.*

I think that it has a lot of plot for a one pager. Very nice and agian I say BRAVO!

It would mean very much to me if you would look at my Shinzon story...thank you!

BRAVO!

I just read your ficlet, and i must i was very impressed. You description of the balcony scene was glorious! full of senses and visuals that flowed really well to paint a picture of the lovers and the landscape. I was in awe. I hope that you will correct the formatting error that made your fic all one paragraph, because it was magnificent. Do you plan on adding more back-story?

Very sensual and fabulously written. Kudos on such a great short story!

Would you consider reading 'Shinzon of Remus'? I'd love to hear from you...

Oh, this is very fun. Reads like a true boddace-ripper.

:-D Wonderful you include the rich story of Isis into the tragic and deserving fiction of Shinzon. I'm really excited because I am writing a similar idea (screenwrite format) that brings in Nemesis/Adrasteia, the goddess from ancient Rome/Greece! Mine doesn't have a happy ending at all though, so...don't worry, we don't romanticize too similarly. :D keep writing!

And I promised you a review if you posted this!

Yes, it is just as I envisioned from your words-the balcony, the palace, the deep and abiding peaceful joy mingled with desire. I can see her so easily, standing there, with his arms around her waist, her arms around his neck. Lovely imagery, and an excellent introduction. Poor Jean-Luc...you shall have to make him happy someday as well.

~Riene