This is great XD (Just wanted to let u know that someone is still enjoying this story even tho it was made over a decade ago. 15 actually)

awesome story

I have just discovered your fic, and I very like it! I am in a hurry to know the continuation, but that made a long time which was published, then I have little hope, but good, it's always necessary to hope. I wanted just to says you that I like it, and that I attent impatiently to know the continuation! bye

excuse me for my English, I speak French, and I have I am not very good in English,still excuse me

Ha ha! That was great! You deserve more than four reviews... As to the villians, I don't know how much help I'll be, I haven't read enough comics. My suggestion would be to just make some up. Maybe to be different you could have some sort of naturalist group based out of the west coast, afterall conservative senators have been done a lot. You could say their creed was to protect the natural order and that mutants were an abomination, caused by man and his radiation and pollution. You could even toss in weird stuff like Gia (I have no idea if that's spelled right) or Ecofascism or Deep Ecology which talks about biocentrism/ecocentrism: nature before all, and nuture for it's own sake rather than to serve man.

Hope that helps, yes it's weird, but then again look where it's coming from... A fan fic author! Good luck! Update soon!

Hey! Very cool! I've been hoping someone would do a fic about this! You do a great job with the dialouge, I also like the way you portray Scott. I don't like him much myself.

That was too funny! Be sure to bring Jubilee with you! Oh God, i fell over laughing. Not quite sure who should be the villian, I'll think on that. Oh! and Logan's claws comin out, it's spelled SNIKT... i only know cause i'm obsessed with that word for some weird reason... write more soon!

I'm really interested in where this story is going... it got my attention- please write more!

this is really good! aside from a few typos, its great. it doesn't matter that you're not an expert on the X-men, as long as you get the characters powers and personalities right, you con do anything with them. put up a new chapter soon! (did i neglect to tell you my FAVORITE character is Logan?)