trying...not...to...laugh... not working. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HA! that was funny!

*whimpers* i want more! :)

WD: That was funny.

The Mystics laughing in the backrond.

Flare Mystic: That was funny even though I don't know what it ment.

Fang and Sand Mystic (Tarible twins):thats good. We too thought it was funny.

Inarro Mystic: Terific.

Tarible twins: Don't you mean horrerific.

Nerash Mystic: In your was not his.

Dark Mystic: Keep up the good work OrangeGirlExplosion.

WD: yes what Dark siad.

I loved it, it was so cute. _ Please write more to go along with this story. You are a good writer. domo arigato, ja ne

Ahahahaha... that was great. Great, great great!

lol hurray! I can't find ANY Jigen/Lupin stories. Yeck, they're all Fujibitch and Darling Lupin

lol this is to funny plz continue!

nice one, I always enjoy seeing someone lust after jigen, and it being lupin just adds to the humor. anywho, any plans to add more to this, like lupin professing his undying love or goemon letting it slip out?

A most enjoyable and humorous read. *grins, purrs and nods* I especially liked the way you wrote Goemon and the way his mind works. Lupin was his usual charming (and slightly annoying to those involved perhaps, but not to the reader) self, as was Jigen (though the 'charm'-part was a bit tuned down there, [though maybe that's just because I don't think of Jigen as being in possession of 'charm'] ;). I hope you'll write more for Lupin I! _

*Squeal* Please continue! I love LupinXJigen (or Goemon for that matter...) Whoo-hoo!

dont stop now!

I love Lupin/Jigen stories, & you write them so well. I really hope you continue this, it's so funny _

heh. I love the way you portrayed Goemon's thinking. And the interaction between him and lupin was really funny.

Are you going to continue this?

Hey, admist the oversilliness. That was real good. Heh. LupinXJigen is my favorite, and you really kept Goemon in character. I don't know if you are a part of my Lupin I Yaoi group yet, but if you aren't, certainly join and achieve this story. It was great.

group/lupin3_yaoifans/

I would really like to see where you go from here... I'm not sure how likely it is that Lupin would like Jigen, but it's pretty possible that Jigen has at least a slight crush on Lupin. If you ever see 'The Mystery of Mamo' Jigen's basic role in the film is saving Lupin and following him around like a puppy when he isn't saving him or smoking. It's just a sort of feeling that I got from the film... But, anyway, great little story. Cute more than anything, and you also have a pretty nice sense of comedic timing. I hope you'll consider updating soon.