| Reviews for The Fourth Power |
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WeasleyTwinsHeven chapter 28 . 3/7 Oh my love and heart. This was wild journey and I am missing next chapter. Only thing I want to say as negative is that there were times when you forgot to mark "someone talking" correctly and just wrote straight without using (") mark. And I understand that people try to tell you how to write, but the story is your adaptation from Orginal it is a Fanfic and that allows you to make all the changes that is needed to change the story. Keep going. |
Doreen chapter 28 . 7/5/2019 Salut, j'espère que tout va bien pour toi, je voulait savoir s'il y aura une suite à cette histoire, je l'aime beaucoup... a plus... peut-être Si jamais tu lis cette review : im french and i write in my native language J'espère vraiment vraiment que tu vas bien... c'est très inquiète le mot de la fin, sachant que tu n'as pas réécrit derrière, après tu n'as peut-être plus envie d'écrire cette histoire, mais je pense que tu devrait au moins nous dire si tu vas bien et si tu compte continuer que l'instant attende pas pour rien, si tu ne nous envoie rien tout le monde va penser que tu es mort, et clairement c'est ce que je pense aussi... |
MercieTorres chapter 12 . 2/27/2019 Ooh, loved the sweating blood bit. |
MercieTorres chapter 7 . 2/27/2019 At first I didn't understand what Harry meant when he said letting others kill for them until I read the last part, where it turns out that it was actually the pathologist who killed Nott, and I couldn't stop laughing, that was just genius. |
Guest chapter 10 . 11/22/2018 The amount of shorter chapter plus the increase stupidity of saving a rapist is enough to declare this as a full of shit6 story |
GdHpforever chapter 25 . 8/5/2018 very e |
Guest chapter 7 . 4/3/2018 Well up to here it was confusing, has no really good plot and a lot of hole that state rapist and moRon will be saved meaning bad story. In this case it show also a lot of nonsense information like shadow been summon by Voldemort, meaning more stupidity. That it take 3 years to get where it dye is a clear signal of writer not knowing where to go due to a lot os stupidity’s on an story. Any excuse is just that excuses. So bad story |
ainokea2810 chapter 7 . 2/11/2018 I have been reading FF for a long time. This has got to be the BEST death/murder scenes I have ever read! Amazing! |
LeiaKasta chapter 28 . 11/7/2017 This is amazing. Thank you for a story where the fantasy elements make sense and it’s truely enjoyable. Creations this great are rare. |
AutumnSouls chapter 1 . 10/23/2017 Oh fuck yes. |
Calindy chapter 28 . 9/6/2017 Hi! I know this was written a long time ago, but the story and magic is still unique. I hope you're well and safe. |
Guest chapter 19 . 8/25/2017 fuck the wandering author's notes |
automaton14 chapter 28 . 7/27/2017 So close to the end. Also, your note at the end is a little ominous, considering you just stopped writing and haven't updated your profile. People could worry, if they didn't stalk your favorites list and see that you have stories favorited from twothree years ago. |
fingerprint-by-fingerprint chapter 28 . 5/12/2017 LOVE THIS SO SO MUCH! AHHH, IT'S SO INTERESTING AND UNIQUE! I absolutely love this concept and love! I LOVE what you have done with these characters! Very well-written! I hope you come back to this someday! Awesome job, thanks for posting! :D |
dogbertcarroll chapter 28 . 12/21/2016 It's been a decade so I think we can declare this fic dead, but it seems strange to see it die so close to the end. |