LOL that disclaimer.

["Will and I have not discussed having children."
"Does that mean you are unable to have one until you speak of it?"]
LMAO thank you, Mrs. Norrington.

Oh, Elizabeth, you tease.

Oh shit, what is Norrington going to do? Ahh cliffhanger!

["Don't worry, Mr. Turner, you'll still be able to have children.]
That totally earned a chuckle from me.

Eww Norrington Jealous is not a good look on you. I wonder what this devilish plan is of his. And he's naming his ship Lady Elizabeth? I'm intrigued.

Ooh, I like this! I'm intrigued about the dream she's having, and the tension between the two men at the end was perfect, very in character. Looking forward to seeing where this goes.

i love it already and look forward to reading your lotr series too!

I love it! Especially the ending - my name is Emily as well. What I would give to be THAT Emily! I liked the reality of it all. You did a great job staying true to the characters! Keep writing!

Wow.

That was awesome!

Definetely one of the best "evil Norrington" stories I've come across! And I adore the Will/Elizabeth.

Great plot, great chracterization, great everything!

Me likes.

Where's Capitain Jack? Heehee, you named the butler godfried.. i know where thats from

You are one of my favourite authors and I bow to thy greatness. *claps*

Please write a sequel or a new Will/Liz.

That was great. Well done I loved it. I 'm gonna read the next one now. Anywayz great story !

WRITE MORE STORYS MAKE CHATPER TWO WRITE MORE PLEASE WRITE MORE PLEASE WRITE MORE PLEASE!

MAKE MORE NEW CHAPTERS PLEAE I"M ENJORYING THEM AND I WOULD LIKE IT IF YOU MAKE MORE.

You need to make it more ROMANCE. For will and Elizabeth.

i think you are doing great i love pirates of the caribbean its so cool so keep up the good work make more chapters please.

Yay! I loved it. Beautiful, suspenseful, well-written... Wonderful job!

Don't you take geography lessons or something? The Caribbean Sea is located in the Atlantic Ocean, not the Pacific.