Your story actually hits a little to close to home for me, two years ago my daughter was removed from my custody because she was running away and I was having a hard time keeping up with her and I had a new born baby boy to take care of also. I was able to get her back after five and a half months, but it took a lot of jumping through hoops and only an hour long visit every Friday and she had to miss my sister's wedding where she would have been the flower girl. I wanted to give up and not care about anything because my baby was gone I raised my daughter on my own with only the help of parents from the time I was eighteen to the day they took her away even now I sometimes wonder where my happy little girl has gone because when I got her back she wasn't the same her sparkle just wasn't what it used to be. Everyday I hold my babies close and tell them how much I love them and how proud I am to be their mommy.

I LOVE THIS STROY PLEASE COME BACK.

shit. how can shannon be so damn cruel? i mean, she may have her reasons, but can she NOT just let poor Chrirty be happy with TC & Chris? yeesh!

UPDATE!

~Lenni~

P.S. I'll try n check back more often. I haven't been getting notification's about any updates or reviews l8ly.

Aww. How cute...Glad Chris is A-ok...well, she seems to be anyway...And Christy - though I know she was upset - has NO right to tal k2 T.C. & Cory the way she was...Good boot in the ass will put a stop to that...Lol...J/k...

UPDATE!

~Lenni~

Ack! Poor Chris! UPDATE! Glad the baby's ok & Christy! Bet its those whacko people who want Christy that hit Chris! UPDATE!

~Lenni~

Aww...SO glad she's ok!

~Lenni~

UPDATE! Feel bad 4 Christy, but she's SO cute! And the hole in the heart, is called a "heart murmur", just in case yah dunno. UPDATE!

~Lenni~

Well this chapter was better as the other one's I guess. This was actually the first time that Christy showed any feelings beside being happy.
So keep writeing I wanna know how this develops!
PS: A little tip: it would be better for the reader [especially for one who's first language isn't english ;)] if you would write more structured and what you actually should never do is use shortcuts like u you always write out the word. Something else m... oh well leave some space between the sentences/ so that it is more clear like in the other FanFics well i guess that's it for now
bye

I really love your story. please keep adding more. it is great. add more soon please

okay well i just read my last review and i have to say I dont know why I wrote that (Cant wait to see how Tc will react when he finds out...) I guess I was confused :P Anyway now to this chapter! Well I totally agree with Maartje that the little girl Christy is way too happy after all what shes been through. Just imagine yourself in her position would you be this happy when it was you stepmother that just shot myself. Anyway i think that story is good except for a few mistakes but keep going I wanna see what happens next.

Lana :)

Hey this story is great. I hope Chris is pregnant because TC/Chris are a great couple.

Well, I liked this chapter a bit less, Cgristy seems a total Mary Sue, everything is so sweet it makes my teeth ache and the drama doesn't really come out. And well the spelling, riteright or write.

Try to get in the mind of a scared, traumatized five year old a little more. Would you be so cheerful if you just watched your stepmother shoot herself? Or at least hear and know...

Aw this is such a cute story. Please continue I cant wait to see how Tc will react when he finds out that hes going to be a father

Please continue and keep :)

glory

Aww, that was so sweet! I wish I could right Waff like that.

Although if you put author's notes in the middle of a waff it kinda ruins the mood.

I thought that the police would be the ones to call children's services. Then she'd be assigned a case worker who'd place her with a foster family until all the legal issues were solved, then she'd be placed up for adoption.