Hi. Mitsumistar here. This is really interesting. I hope you continue it's getting better.

I somehow found this and as I was reading I thought "This seems familiar," and when I got to the end of chapter 5 it hit me. This was the first fanfiction I ever read! As a bonus 3 more chapters were added in the years I was gone. Sadly it hasn't been updated in almost five years. Oh well. This was an excellent story and thank you for introducing me to fanficton. Later.

Nice story, can’t wait until the next one

Cool! Carry on!

First, I'd like to apologize if for any reason you thought that my last review meant that I wanted you to get another chapter up within the next day. I was under the impression that you were ending the story there, and I simply meant that I wanted you to continue the it sometime. Again, I'm sorry for any misunderstandings that may have occured, and I hope you took no offense.

You're writing is really great, but try to watch the spelling errors, as they seem to have increased somewhat. Anyway, I can't wait to see more of your work! Keep it up! -

I'm really looking forward to reading more of this, as it's one of the more interesting stories I've read in the IZ section. Hope you write more soon! _

Wonderful. Your ability to tell an engaging story is flawless, and your OC doesn't even hint at ever becoming a Mary-Sue. Just a quick thing, though: How old is Rem? Is she in the same grade as Dib and Zim? Well, anyway, I'm glad to see you've updated, keep being awesome!

Yikes!

Geez, I'd give poor rem 3 days.

KEEP UP!

Great chapter! I really don't have any crits on this one, but please don't tell me this is the end of the story. I think that at this point you've already gotten the readers so enthralled(sp?) in the story that it'd be a major dissapointment to stop here (plus we'd all like to see what eventually becomes of Rem). Besides, with you being the best writer here, I think that we'd all like to see some more of your work.

Can you tell I'm your number-one fan yet? XD

-Hoping that you'll at least consider a sequal,

Keckhs.

I love how matter-of-factly Zim explains everything. "Ripped out your organs! Mm-hm!" Heh-heh.

Keep writing this!

*claps* As always, your writing has once again amazed me, although there were several more typos in this chapter than before. Of course, I know you wrote this in only one night, so I won't go into detail on that. I'm really glad you put up a new chapter. Keep up the good work!

Also, I don't know if you remember me, but I'm the one who PMed you on Gaia (which is how I know that you only wrote this chapter in one night. I'm not phsycic or anything!).

Nice!

Transformation rocks!

I thought the fic was gon, but i was glad i was wrong, welcome back.

PEACE!

TylerTFL

Holy Chipmunks In Battle Armor, you updated! Welcome back to the fic writing, dude!1 Update soon, as in, please don't wait another year!

EK! CANNOT BELIEVE THIS! im at school and i just was lookin up on authors that i like and i wanted to remember what i said in a review for this I HAD NEVER REVIED IT! AAHH! IM SO SORRY! I LOVE THIS STORY I COULD HAVE SWORN I REVIE- BELL! GOTTA GO! UPDATE

what happens next! what happens next!

zim is so EVIL here... heehee