I was too lazy to log in but great job. I really like your story and I really feel for Percy. I love writing him because there are so many loose ends we get to fill in. I loved the story :) Thanks for writing it

-Chemical Violets

Wait: Percy throws his clothes just on the floor? - I htought he would stack them up on a chair... Well, I guess he IS an 11 year old boy after all!

This story was amazing, I could just see Percy as child behaving like that, it would be so him! - Popmpous and self important, but at the same time feeling left out and alone. - Actually it is a self-importance born out of hte feeling of being the odd one out. - If you feel like you are not important to anybody, you are the only one you can be important to, right?

And you do not only see htis in the story, but also how he DOES care of his family, how he wants them to succeed, too... How he does feel like a big brother, exspecially to Ginny and Ron and does not want them to be scared, ever. - All of this yo ucan find in the books, too, if you look!

It's an old story and I guess when you wrote it Ginny's full name was not known yet, so I own'T say anything more there. ;)

I feel sorry for Percy and i realyl iked the way you wroteh im here.

Thanks for this perfect little story!

Tam

Aww, this was wonderful.

Loved the part about not making Molly cry :o

I came here from coffee and chocolate...

I also liked the Ron-Percy chess games :)

Thanks :D

My heart remains broken for Percy.

He's so lonely*.

...I want to hug him.

i wish you would get more reviews- this really is a well-written story - i've always liked percy,and that ending really hit me.

Well written! You captured emotion well!

The only thing I'd have to say is Ginny's full name is not Virginia (she's English not American!), but rather it is Ginevra.

Aww, terribly sweet, I loved it. Percy has always been one of my favorite characters to write, right up there with Draco, and you did a great job with it. I especially liked the way it was written in present tense.
"It is almost like being the only child in a family with three sets of twins." -Great line, even if it is a touch depressing, lol. Well, keep up the great work and happy writing! -Ozzy-

I liked it! It was really, really, really good, and I could see his POV because that's how it is when my family gets together. THe olders ones are all about 4 years older than me and the younger ones are 3 years younger, so I'm left all alone.
I really enjoyed this fanfiction.
Uozumi

*sobs and sobs and sobs*

wah, this is such a brilliant fic! I love your style and how it's so simplistic but how absolutely heartbreaking it all is, and it just makes me go "WAH!"

And your Percy! :(( He is so self-important and pompous but so darling and loveable! There are so many things I can pick out that I love about this story, like the Ministry seals (!) and Ronald & Virginia not Ron & Ginny and just - well everything really.

"Percy delights in sharing the things he knows, so he talks and talks and sometimes somebody listens."

That is such a wonderful line, and so wibble-inducing! :(

I think I am in love with you, and your Percy, and your fic.

"A well rounded critique is often the most rewarding tool for the writer."

:0 :o :((

That was sweet. I guess Percy has always had his life mapped out then...