hmm..i think this story is good ... but then ...

1st why do Omi got SO much pairing ? well.. maybe he's like a girl ... ."

2nd i'd more prefer to have more kenxOmi stuff _

oh ya ~! i wonder how'd ya gonna put the end for this story ?

something like ken protecting Omi and die , and then omi resurrect him with he's unknown power ? _

hmm.. i think this was quite simple thought... but i love it ~! imagine the angel wings flapping behind omi hugging ken in his arm ... and tears dropping on his face ... woa ... T_T

Ooh! This is really exciting and I like this story really much!

Omi is so kawaii~ !

And now I hope that you updated soon, please.

I'm still visiting from time to time, please continue this good story. It's such a waste to leave it like this.

pls continue the story, coz i'm planning to print this when it's done! Arigatou! -

Please continue... I'm hooked...

Who exactly is this Treufel? Why does she want Omi? Why is Tot so afraid of Rei Takashi? I looked up her background. Her real name is Nanami Hibino, and her birth father was a very bad man, he did something to Nanami and her mother...Is Rei really Tot's birth father?

U. R. SO. GOOD! WRITE MORE! PLEASE!

All right, I'm certain now of who Treufel is supposed to be. Now that I've been reminded of who Takashi Rei is supposed to be, it only makes his working together with Schreient (especially Tot) all the more interested.

This chapter went past in a whirl of images and action. I'm not certain if it was intentional or not, but the jumping in the action helped convey the fevered state of Omi's mind as I was reading it. I don't entirely understand why Crawford left his prey when he was so close to obtaining Omi, but since his motivations haven't exactly been straightforward I'm not surprised they're not clear this time, either.

You'll find no complaints on the addition of a bit of Aya(Ran)/Omi to this fic from me, seeing as how Aya/Omi was actually my first favorite WK pairing and the one I'm currently writing in one of my fics. That much said, KenOmi is still my favorite WK pairing no matter how you look at the series, even in Gluhen.

I still love this fic and I hope you get the time and desire to write some more of it in the near future.

I was right. You're not giving anything away yet.

I have a couple suspicions of Truefel's identity, but I've yet to make up my mind, and even if I do there's a good chance I'd be wrong. Now that Persia's "death" has been explained, I at least understand what he was doing in the story, though now it's complicated by the knowledge of Omi's past. I'm intrigued by Takashi Rei's association with Schreient and how that relates to Masafumi, especially now that Masafumi is alive again (or perhaps just undead?).

I'd be more creeped out by Masafumi's thoughts towards Mamoru, but at the moment I find both Crawford and Schuldig's obsession with Omi a bit more disturbing. At least Masafumi seems to have some part of Mamoru's well-being in mind, albeit in some twisted way that I'll probably hate him for in another couple of chapters.

(finally catching up on long-overdue reviews)

Wow. That chapter was spectacular. You had a little bit of everything in there - Ken and Omi fluff, some suspense, a lot of action, and a dose of angst on top of it all. The mystery deepens - who is Takashi Rei? Who is Truefel? Why is Shuichi still alive? (And Masafumi, for that matter) What is going on with Omi?

Thankfully there's another two chapters left for me to catch up on, but with the knownledge of how you've been spinning the web of this story from the start, I expect I'll have more questions than answers by the time I'm done reading tonight.

It's been a while since I had time to read (and surf the web), and this is updated! This chapter is exciting and entertaining, my favourite part is when Omi ran away from Nagi and Crawford. This chapter is worth for the waiting!

OH YEAH!Ran/Omi rocks my world!XDXD Nice going!

I loved it!

_ I'm glad you're still continuing the chapter. I had the same problem before so no need to worry. I'm still stuck on what to do for my next chapter of my story and yet I still haven't updated my other chapter yet since I still need to put something on.
I like Ran/Omi too. I think of them as yin and yang don't you think? Anyway this chapter has so much excitement that I had to read it twice. I think I read Unwanted Desire and Project Angel. They were really good.
Well I hope you continue soon. TCCIC! (Take care cause I care) -

I can't wait for the next two chapters. Please hurry and finish the story. It is the highlight of my entire week.