Wow! Very nice. I love the idea that Jack had left the chess board set up in the middle of their unfinished game. Sounds like something he would do. Very sweet and poignant story and in character! : ) Thank you!

Gin huh? I dunno.. I coulda beat him! I've been practicing with OmaDesala... Er, I think... hmm...

Wow...I loved this. I've been looking for something like this for a long time. I just think it was strange, the way they did it on the show...there was really big wholes left in the whole reunion thing. So anyway, I was worried when I first started. Because basically you can do a piece like this only two ways...totally bomb it, or ace it...and you aced it!

This was done wonderfully. Jack didn't give up his grudge too fast (if he had it just wouldn't have been jack) and Daniel didn't stop pushing...

I really enjoyed this! Thanks for giving me a wonderful read!

GREAT WORK!

~ INFINITY FIRE

AH! THIS WAS SO BEYOND CUTE! *drools of the fluff overload* IH! And Sam! She's so cool! LOL! W00t! This was the BOMB! You've gotta write more! Please!

Damn... Nice, Layton. Good ebb and flow with the story, letting it turn one way then another. Thank you. :)

I said it before and I'll say it again...I love your Daniel stories!

Very nice...always enjoy your stories!

wow! very nice! I could actually see them doing that in an episode! great job with the dialogue between Jack and Daniel, you nailed it right on the money! The Chess was a great way to bring the story to a close, great work. You should write more like that!

Very good Layton. So full of emotion. It really brought back the hurt of seeing Daniel go and why Jack didn't ask him to stay. Very well written.

Another WONDERFUL example of your talent! I LOVED it! I was SO hoping for a scene between Daniel and Jack in the beginning of Season 7. This could have been the scene!:O) It was terrific! Now...if you'd just finish a certain fic about...oh...I dunno...FISHING! LOL