I'm sorry, I really do, but I couldn't even read this story. Poseidon as Persephone's father? Really?! Zeus is Seph's father, NOT Poseidon! I don't know what mythology book you own, but I seriously suggest you to buy a new one.

OH GOSH NO! HADES TO THE NO! This is yes. but No! Just no! but yes. *sighs* so much incest in the greek myths. Technically Hades is marrying his Niece and calling his brother Dad. That's freaking messed up! GODS! But I'm sinfully enjoying this. Thank you. Just thank you.

Very informatic fountain lady

Thanks dad. Really. :P

Oh my god. I can't even tell you how funny I found that.

Bahahaha!

Yes. This is totally how the myth should go.

Best ending ever.

This short story was excellent fun and sticks very well to the tone of the Disney movie.

Major thumbs up for this one.

lol this as super cute! Great job!

Aw! This was so sweet! I love Pain and Panic being Persephone's escorts in the Underworld - and their encounter with Cerberus was plenty exciting! Poor Pain, he can never get a break. *g*

Love the idea of the public trial, as well as Demeter throwing a temper tantrum when her case went sour. Great idea setting Athena against Ares, too. After all, in the original myths they quarreled often.

Thanks for the fun read!

awesome story, love the humor

BLOODY HELL! I couldn't stop laughing at this whole chapter, especially the last part! Absolutely hilarious!

LOL. Not gonna lie. This story made me laugh REALLY hard! Thanks for the good laugh. :)

Wonderful use of the Greek mythos. Well done!

Cute. Funny. I laughed. And Hades, the all-powerful Lord of the Dead, is Persephone's personal b*. Totally WHIPPED. XD
Keep writing!
~MDF

Great story! Very entertaining, I loved the interaction and plot :) Eh, so what if it doesn't follow the TV series? I enjoyed reading it! Poseidon cracked me up; "Son!" lol