Nicely done. Right balance kept.

brill! :)

Very nice piece, you captured the boys very well.

I do love this fic. In fact, I love any fic where Scott is fussing over his brothers. And any fic which shows how close they all are, and how much they do care.

Nicely written, and shows caring without becoming too overly sentimental.

Awww what a great one-shot! I love Tracy brotherly love, especially when it includes hurt John! Really well written, I thought you had the characters spot on. This is going on my fave list!

This story was really touching. There was a lot of good discription. I'm terrible at reviews but wanted to just say I liked this little chapter, It was one of the best I've read.

cute fic, i enjoyed reading this one _

This was just... beautiful!

Loves it

That was really, really cute! It's nice to see a nice brotherly love fic that doesn't resort to incest! ~VERY SWEET~

That's a really sweet story. I love how it's Scott who comes to John, and not the other way around. Shows their relationship stronger than their words ever could.

Beautiful.

Gorgeous fic. A poetic gem.

I don't know what I can add that other reviewers have not already said. This is a beautifully written and very moving portrayal of the bond between two brothers. Please write more like this!

Rain! What a beautiful description of the bond between Scott and John, and Scott's feelings for all his brothers. Your story moved me so much and I love the way Scott's protectiveness towards John is so strong, yet very gentle and tender. John could let go, and be secure in his brother's love. I cried. Please write more, I'll look forward to more of your stories. Thank you.

Rain,

I love this. Shows how close the Tracy sons are and especially since it involves Scott and John.. the two eldest and ones you don't often relate together. Please write more. I will enjoy immensely.

mcj