Boy, I can't wait for the next installment!

This is perhaps the very finest Golden Sun fanfic I've ever read

(with the exception of a particularly humorous one about reality

TV shows by Mr. Jupiter)

Keep up the good work!

hi i like ur story so far but i have a question about the game since i cant figure it out in the first game when u cross the sea and get to the cave to help that guy thats in the dark what do u do to the crystals because ive been trying and im stomped thank you if u write back bye

what game about?

HEY! What's up? me- LOOK! LOOK! I HAVE A LOGIN NOW! Yea! (crowd in background cheers and goes wild) Woo! _

Just thought I'd share the news with you. _~

hi, i just wanted congradulate you on SUCH a great story! It has all the elements of Golden Sun and yet a plot of its own as well, which makes it so interesting. I really liked the prochecy and how realistic and sensable it sounded. I really hope you continue writing this because it is so well done! The lemon wasn't so bad, i personally think some people make them gross and too... explictite but you had some taste when writing it, so kudos! please update soon! i really enjoy the lance and lily banter! . ah those love hate relationships, how i adore them. I hope you write more about them two but maybe some awkard moments or such. - those are always amusing. well congrats again, and update for the love of iris! (pretty please? i'll give a free cyber cookie if you do!)

Reasons of contact:

-Do you think I show potential?

-Or am I REALLY annoying you? I bet I am, huh? Sorry.

-Or am I foretelling the future chapters?

I have a knack for that sometimes.

Also, I cannot do a signed review for now, as my e-mail is not working. I'll let you know whenever it is/can work.

I look forward to reading your next updated chapter!

Please update soon!

Some more long and boring comments. _~ jk. I hope.

Anyway, I was just thinking that,(something I had forgotten to mention before) the ability that Will and Kara share is the fusion! Like what Saturos and Menardi had. It would explain them coming back, because someone had to show them how to do the fusion. It's a really unique feature that can increase odds of winning in battle, in my opinion. (Unless you were Saturos and Menardi against Isaac and co. at the battle of Venus Lighthouse at the end of the first game.) But, like I said, what if, should this be the Fusion technique, Will and Kara did something wrong, and messed it up? That wouldn't be good, so it would be best if someone taught them how to do it.

Also, if Lance is only part Proxian, then I would be assuming that one of his parents is human. Who would it be then? And who was his other parent, the Proxian? But, whoever it was, the parents probably had either red or orange hair, and green eyes. His skin itself, though probably not as thick as a Proxian's, would be thicker than a humans. So if you look at his physical characteristics, you may be able to determine the genes in which he inherited from his parents, which in turn could lead to who his parents were. He did mention that he had an uncle, however, so I'm assuming the Proxian side. I wonder who Lance's family is going to be revealed to be... This will be interesting...

Ah, more rambling. But I go by what I've said before. You may use an idea I put down if you like it. I look to reading your next updation! I'll stop before I talk more and bore you . :D

Hey! I like the idea of the Kraden's Journal at the end of the chapters. It's a really neat idea :D I look forward to the next time you update.

Also, if you need some ideas for the next chapter, I have a few. I believe that the rooms they entered should test them to how they were portrayed, like with Will and Kara, they should be tested more in more of a puzzle-like way, prove their knowledge and unity, because they were called the sages. Likewise, Lance and Lilly in more of a trap, because they would be tested in a physical power sort of way. Do you get what I'm trying to say? I'm having a little hard time trying to describe it; sorry if it's a little vague. I also think that they should battle a guardian monster, I believe they were called, such as Dullahan or Star Magician, but instead of receiving a summoning tablet as a token of worthiness, they receive one of the last items. Then, afterwards, they are led to an entrance that leads both groups to each other. They find another path, and where they find themselves can be different, I guess. One idea I just came up with is that both the Sol Sanctum and the Anemos Sanctum are connected, and they wind up there. Or, they wind up at the top of Mount Aleph, and meet Alex. They create such a commotion (such as in a battle, for example), that they attract Isaac, Felix and co., in which results in a giant battle that can in turn force many different paths of choice. One is the possibility of what would happen if Alex got the Crops of Alchemy? Or if Alex became overwhelmed with so many Adepts, that he became injured, and was forced to flee? Or if Alex showed up and captured one of the co.? What would happen then? And since Saturos and Menardi are alive, how are they going to affect the current Adepts? Will they run into them? And if Saturos and Menardi are alive, wouldn't Karst and Agatio be alive as well?

As you can see, I have been thinking a lot. If you saw anything there that you liked, you may use it if you choose to. Just put a recognition at the beginning of the next chapter, so I may wonder throughout reading what you used. _ Thanks! I hope I haven't rambled too much, and that this may have given at least a little inspiration to help you. I hope that this isn't too long to be talking, either. Well, I look forward to reading your next chapter! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! :D

(chant)

2-4-6-8! When will you update?

Please update! Please update!

PLEASE UPDATE! THIS IS GETTING REALLY GOOD! WE'RE IN SUSPENSE!

I am offering this review because this is my all time favorite story and you are not updating

Best. Story. Ever. I really want another update soon.

Well, me personally, I prefer Isaac/Jenna, Garet/Mia. I haven't decided on whether I prefer Sheba/Ivan, or Sheba/Felix yet though. The first two I like, but I haven't completely decided on who to pair Sheba with. You decide what's easier for you to write. :D

I am offering this review because this is my all time favorite story and you are not updating. No, seriously. I left lots of identical reviews all at once on purpose, with the hope that it will somehow inspire you to update. If you don't update soon, i will shrivel up and die for lack of good writing. how's that for guilt, eh? My shriveled up remains will also stink up my entire room and kill my cat in ways I can't explain.

Now, if you had updated you could have gone through life witihout getting this cruddy message. The moral lesson I barley salvaged out of this crappy review is: Please update soon!

I am offering this review because this is my all time favorite story and you are not updating

I am offering this review because this is my all time favorite story and you are not updating.