Oh, that was beautiful! You have me crying! beautiful!

I cried practically the whole way through. That was one of the best Sirius poems I have ever read. Excellent job! It flowed and rhymed very well. Thanx for writing this!

That is just beautiful, I love it!

*sniff* Poor Padfoot

That was the perfect thing to write.(Sobbs uncontrollably) I am so angry and sad that Sirius is dead and this was a great way to put everything to rest.(Still sobbing) That was beutiful and (sniffling) you are a great writer. Thank you for writing that. R.I.P. Sirius Black you are in our hearts forever!

Kim I absolutly love this it's,in one word beautiful.

Why'd he have to die? -_-

Your poem has really helped me realize something: live goes on after Sirius. And somehow, the books will too... :P LOL

~MuseQ

*cries* omgod! That was brilliant! You wrote so well it certainly made me cry! *goes into the bathroom and cries harder* it was soo sweet, I reckont that's what sirius would defenitly try to tell those who truely care about him. And I also think that that's what he would write. But its really sad, why did he have to die? And why can't he come back? I hate JKR (not really)...

Great Job!

Fuzzy Angel

AAww! That is SO good! I luv it! Im so sad- I cried when he disappeared "beyond the veil" and much more besides. I'm so glad you have written this- Sirius was one of my favourite characters and I'm really going 2 miss him in books 6 and 7. Well done!

Yours,

Hermione Double

*sob* That's really good. *sob* Padfoot will always be with us. *sob*

~ Star of the South ~

I absolutly love it. Sirius death was unexpected as well as unfair...but, i guess thats how life is.

great poem! it was so sad that he's gone! *bursts into tears* well :sniffles: at least he'll be remembered in your poem...