Great work! I've seen like no robot stories around, so it's good to finally find one!

Really good. Really really good.

I loved this story. The mood and emotion are perfect.

Thank you.

oh god. please write more. i really like this. the prespective you took and the idea! the emotions and everything. it makes a wonderful story.

*cries* So damn beautiful!

Riveting. Very good portrayal of each character. This sounds like it might be leading to a "relationship" with Jack and Daniel! What? Bt other than that, really good.

My god - that has to be the most sad and happy and beautiful story I have ever read ...

This is really good, please update soon?

I'm really enjoying this story, and I hope that you'll post more parts soon!

Great fic - hope there is more coming.

Personally I would like to see them get together,

but you would probably need to take it to an R rating to do it right.

BTW - it is lose not loose

Well I'm intrigued. But I'm also such a wimp when it comes to angst. I tend to find it depressing. But, it's a great idea, and I'd like to see where you take it.