Virginia? i thought Ginny's full name was Ginevra.

i don't mean to be a downer, but can you improve your grammar a bit? sometimes its a little confusing to read.

You asked people to tell you what they think,so here I go. I think you need to have something bad happen. A death eater uprising or something else.

write about the dinner and have death eaters come !1

All right, Every body seems to want more romance, but how are you going to get there? I think you need a villan to get things rollin' and in the midst of that, have the Harry/Ginny thing take off. Harry should fight some evil and Ginny could come along for the ride and help, maybe, um... right. There could be some threat to Hogwarts and the students and Harry is the only one trained to do anything to help. The Z. twins would be great to have along for the whole thing. They're fun! Ginny could do all the emotional support and potion stuff that Harry may need. Don't forget, every couple has a fight at least once in the beginning.
OK, those are my thoughts, and if you want more ideas, e-mail me at: . I'd be more than willing to give you a hand. *not literally, though. It's easier to type w/ both. :P*
Lily Bengal

Ok, so i'm only on Ch.4, but I'm liking it. What's the rating on this thing? no matter.*shrugs* I will enjoy reading it, and i won;t give you any ides until i read the last chapter you've posted, savvy? You should read mine too, 'league and friends' I'd think you'll like it!
Lily
*rubs hand together* mischief insues!*luaghs*

well you could have harry perpose to ginny and they could get married and have twins or you know just have kids of there own and harry could or would tell her what happend in those six years and how much he really cares about her and maybe then they will live happy ever after ok
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toria lea
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have them dance together, watch sunset, then have Ginny fall asleep on his shoulder, saying

"I'm still in love with you..."

Harry however,doesn't hear...or so he thinks.

from behind a tree, a large black dog watches them, going back the way he came. Suddenly the dog is no longer there. Instead a man smiles and vanishes,his words unheard,

"James,your son acts so much like you now. All the Potter men have a soft spot for redheads, your son is no exception. Ms. Weasley has Lily's spirit. Wish you're here now. . . "

have the date go great and have them kiss

i can't help at all ( iwish i could) but i can say that i like the story! Um...I know what ya mean about taking a break tho...I think I'm gonna move away from my new stories (cuz lately i can only come yup with an introduction without a body and thats gettogn annoying!) and work on my old ones that i need to finish. But anywayz...i no whatever you write will be good!

I really hate that only one review is alowed per chapter. I went back to chapter 10 to review and tell you that this story is probaly one of THE best I have ever read. Don't get discoured when you get writers block I find that if you listen to music for a while and let your self get lost in it you can usally come up with a great idea.

Hope I helped you.

~Much encourgement~

~Alli~

I have a brilant idea why don't you have Harry tell Ginny more about how she helped him get through his six years of hell. maybe have harry pull a picture out of his suit pocket of her and tell her a story of how he kept it close to his heat and how it helped him go through it all.

~hope this helps you~

~love the story~

~Alli~

well after that fab start the only place you can go is kissing, relationship and kids at the end, please update soon

AAAWWW i LOVE it! i can't wait for more! get them together soooon! i LOVE it!

Great fic! Can't wait for the next part!