Cute story!

*squeals in delight* Oh my god! You cannot imagine how happy this makes me. I have been looking for this story for *years* now. I only vaguely remembered what it was about, only that is was really good. And it still is. I thoroughly enjoyed this - from plot to characterization. Finding this story has made my day! :)

Interesting story you have here and I love how Yugi is a healer? physician here he helps people and I love how you differentiate a Pharoah from his original personality. .

Aww. What a sweet way to write such an interesting and (that I know of) unexplored idea.

I hadn't really thought of people in power having two sides, but you write it so well that it seems like I've been let in on a secret.

I like that you switched from used Pharaoh to using Yugioh after he took off his crown. It's a nice touch. :)

I love the way you write- extra information and new characters aren't boring, and just make the story even more cherishable.

Just saying, in chapter 2 you referred to Pharaoh as Yami. I'm not sure whether that was intentional or not, so I'm just letting you know. :)

I really enjoyed (procrastinating my homework) reading this story! It's so well written, and the end product is just beautiful.

~YukinoKara

once an imp, always an imp. :D

brittney

oh, how cute! though it shold b rated 'T', that was 1 of the sweetiest yuugixyami(or atemu if perffered) stories ive read!

I loved your Egyptian story! A Please look at my profile and tell me which couple you would like me to write about!

cute story! I could see why it won! Good Work!

Aw, so sweet. I really like how you took the initiative to separate Atem and his title. A lot of forget the pharaoh and the person are separate.

This was probably the most well written, sentimental fanfic that I've read in a long time!

that was... Simply brilliant. As all your stories are proving to be...

As with YamiYuugi, I am systematically reading through all of your stories. And, as with YamiYuugi, I have read most of them and am struggling to find a fault.

Sorry if you wanted constructive criticism, with a story as good as this I can't find anything bad.

The crown part was good. Nice way to wrap it up.

Ah, I see the dilemma. Strange thing to name the pharaoh, though-Yugioh. I thought he was Atem/Atemu, or Yami, at least.

Interesting first chapter. The idea of Yuugi having favor of a god and being a separate being from Yami is interesting.

oh. My. GOD.

That was wonderfull, every word of it, long live puzzleshipping angst! I loved the part when Yami was removing his crown, he was willing to give everything he was to make Yugi happy again.

Loved it, awesome work. :)