it was really good! i hope u dont discontinue this fic, its really good, and i really like it, please continue soon! laterz

TEEHEE! tell me tell me! where was the mole? im not sure what BEEP your talkin about!~! :D

Meg...Crimson said that (she/he)was not very good at English, and it comes to stand, that when the writher is not very good at English, the story tends to get a little choppy, because, well it's a different way of wording!

HOWEVER,

I think with the basic outline of the story, and the words, you should be able to make out a little of the story. I think it is a very interesting story, and if (She/he) had a beta reader it would be better.

Now i'm not sure, Meg, if your comment was supposed to be helpful...(Because it sure didn't to me) but before you criticize someone, why don't you try writing in a different language? I'm sure you will find it QUITE 'easy'.

Now for the review! D

I love the storyline of the fic! Sure some things get a little choppy, but hey, I don't mind!w It's adorabloe, and has some very well placed plot twists. I also love the little faces: O, O_O, O0O, -_-, -, ;_;. It gives a more cutesy feeling to the whole fic, and it makes it different yet similar to other authors writing. With the faces and well described backround, and once your grammar improves,

-Because your spelling is fine w

Great great fiction! This history is so much 's grandson of Lord Demon or not?

I hope you update soon, because I want read next chapter soon.

Great great fiction! This history is so much 's grandson of Lord Demon or not?

I hope you update soon, because I want read next chapter soon.

i have one world for you HUH? wtf is goin on?

yes we are...how long is the next chapter?lol can't wait...

Parting can B so painful. :(

w so cute~ please update~ pleasepleaseplease~

UKL

Wow! This is such a good idea for a ficcie, it's got alot of mystery though and I'm guessing Tyson's father is the demon and his mother is an angel. Am I correct?

ofcourse i enjoyed! it was so GOOD! but the begining of the chapter was a little bit strange... i mean that how you write them to talk... it was strange but i get used to it during the chapter... PLEASE UPDATE A.S.A.P.! i still luv your story!

woohoo! yeah! this chapter is realli gud...i wish this will haf a happy ending, but noeing u...*rolls eyes* well, actually, NOT knowing you...*rolls eyes*...but great chater, neways!

Cool chapter! Funny too. I love the humor in this story. Heck, I love everything in this story. Please continue soon! _

~siver eyes

this is soo gud! thanks by the way..its just recently i hear songs, and i cry..unless its hokey pokey...NOBODY can cry at tht 1...
it was so funni readin botu kais face going all furious at rei for tht pink coloured wing thingy! i fink i nearly died laffing...i mean..kai with PINK? crimson, yes...pink...NO...
o, and i wonder what god told rei? hm...u gotta tell us sumtime, k?
o, and is rei realli going to die? please, no!
but then of course, it would suggest tht god cant look into teh future..mebe u could hav Him kinda test rei...right hand man kind o f thing?
or mebe its just tog et kai to like him? and god knew? dunt noe..ur story!
keep writing...

it was good... but a little different than others.. jet i like it! oh, and you dont have a bad grammar! i have worse... anyway it was good and again... UPDATE A.S.A.P.!