Oh! Very angsty indeed! *applauds* I do so approve of your poetry. Very poemy, it is.

~ Oasis

This. Was. Awesome. Beautiful. Beyond words. I love the ending. It was beautifully written!

You really have a talent for writing poetry. This was excellent.

That's pretty cool (I still luv your name!) The meter was a bit off- confused me a little- I thought it was free verse at first. But it's a really cool concept... nice work!
-Cat

I liked that. It reflects Sirius' inner torment perfectly.

Thanks for the reviews.

awesome job! it conveys sirius' emotions so powerfully. personally, i think the last line really stands out. i dunno why but it does. gah! this makes me think of the ending to the fifth book. so sad...

anyways, nice job!

Too lazy to log on. P

Anyway... good work. Only thing is, I'm not sure if Sirius spoke in rhymes. ;) But that doesn't detract from the quality of this poem.

Keep on writing!

~Lovelorn Genius

Goog job! I especially thought the segmant on the dementors was well-written in both rhyme and rhythm. Hope you'll be adding on more!