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Great story I really liked it a shame that you gave up on it.

mmmm

Kaito is hungry wants to eat

Oh good story anyhow

In a milieux where personal fight is possible, using "flew" for "moving very fast" is probably a mistake. Why did Harry, Ron, and Hermione flee from Mrs. Norris? They weren't out after curfew.

The potions class scene needs a bit of reediting. I'll admit I was disappointed that Nabiki wasn't sorted, Slytherin for sure.

that's compartment, not apartment.

I would prefer ed if you had left the curses intact.

personally harry and hermione as the harry and Ginny pairing in cannon was to forced

plz dont take it down you might not like it or want to continue it but it is still a good story put dead in the summary and mark it as finished but dont take it down plz

Why take it down? it doesnt take any effort to leave it up and if your getting alerts then people are clearly still reading it. I hate it when stories i read a while ago suddenly just disappear.

i will give you my opinion now even though it might not matter...

I think harry and Hermione will be a better match then ginny...

why ... because I think that because ginny looks to much like harry's mother...

and I can't stand ginny weasley for some reason nor can I stand molly weasley.

I hate you.

Ok, sorry but, what? First, I know the whole Nerima/ranma canon was just background really, but I found it frankly annoying you just kind of skipped it all, like Harry being there changed nothing.

While I can see his presence not changing most of the other peoples actions, I definitely see Harry's presence changing Ranma's reactions/handling of things a lot earlier than that frigging wedding disaster. It just came off lazy to me.

But this bit, with a random mary sue *American* witch who *just happens* to move into number 7 privet drive just when they need it. Harry doesn't react to being back on the SAME block he lived on before, he WAS old enough to remember it, so that's badly handled. She knows ALL about Harry Potter and right away writes to Dumbledore. Uh, she's AMERICAN. Just out of nowhere she's in the know enough to immediately contact DD? Is she a fucking plant or what? Otherwise its nonsense. And frankly Ranma ought to be asking if he WANTS her to contact anyone about finding Harry.

Sorry but, while the idea is decent, you're just ruining it with a mary sue, lazily skipping over a major period in things rather than showing how events would change, and jerking things back too near canon for my tastes.

Eh, whatever, I stop here.

Having more then one show cross over into another universe gets tiring and old real fast.