*shudder*

You really enjoy writing depressing stuff don't you? Well, you ARE extrememly good at it, from what I've seen so far.

Very well done!

Yes! A poem with some FORM to it! And a sonnet! Yay! Yay! Yay!

...sorry. My enthusiasm without much editing. _ I very much liked it. It gave palpable feeling to Frodo's struggle very well, and the words formed an atmosphere of smothered sorrow, despair and pain almost perfectly. And a sonnet! Yes! I can't quite articulate how glad I was to see this, and someone who apparently knows something of what they're doing! And the quote from St. John of the Cross fit very nicely with the theme... _

Toodles - IMP