I really liked it up intill the last part. I thought Cecily would have made some kind of wish to have William back and then there would be some kind of conspirace with Spilliam and all this stuff but no... you had to go and make it stupid... :P No I'm just kidding its still good... in its own way... but its to short... no offence!

Heh, that was actually pretty good. *Grins*

The only thing I'd maybe change is the very last line... "Alright, let's go!", because up til then it was all very Period-Piece-Sounding, but that one line's kinda modern-sounding.

Really though, aside from that, nice work. It's hard to fit a lot into under 10 words, and you managed nicely.