It's been several years since you wrote this but my disappointment on this story

It's ALL about Emma... CSI is about the characters of CSI not a character you made up

Grissom and most of all Sara are just back drops of this character that I really don't care about and mother and step-dad who were jerk

So after suffering 40 on chapters so long ( thinking it would get better NOT)... Don't even want finish this long winded story on Emma who cares

Think if want create a new character for a show don't make it the sole character. And one I found boring

Estou muito emocionada agora! Esta é uma das histórias mais lindas que já li por aqui. É quase perfeito! Tantas emoções eu encontrei nessas palavras escritas por você! Foi lindo! Me fez pensar tanto em minha própria filha e como ela é em torno de seu pai, meu marido. Existe um amor especial ali entre eles. Foi especial também envolver Greg nesta família. Foi uma grande ideia criar uma outra realidade para nossos amados Gil e Sara. Parabéns! Eu adorei conhecer seu trabalho. Eu tenho lido milhares de histórias GSR por aqui e tenho uma seleção de favoritas. Minhas preferidas estão relacionadas e é com grande prazer que eu indico esta leitura para meus amigos... Certamente essa história terá a partir de agora seu lugar especial na minha lista. Parabéns mais uma vez por seu trabalho e por compartilhar conosco. Um grande beijo do Brasil. Claudia.

That is so sweet. But sad at the same time. He makes a great father.

Good

OMG I hate Maggie and Don. They are too self centered to see what they have in front to them.

Just 'rediscovered' your story and I really enjoyed it! Very different but I liked your version of 'dad' Grissom.

Your writing is wonderful, I hope you keep up the GSR love!

Yeah, you finished. I have loved this story for... well, six years. I wasn't sure you would finish but I'm really glad that you did. I agree that some of the luster has rubbed off because Grissom and Sara are gone but remember they can live on in fanfiction because anything can happen in the land of Fanfiction. Thanks for the great story.

I've followed this story from the beginning, and I can tell you that this is one of the stories that keeps the real depth of the CSI fanfiction alive. I'm very glad that you finished it, and somewhat embarrassed I didn't see it was finished until now. Congratulations!

TP, sorry it took me so long to review, but I had to go back to the beginning and read it through.

Such a powerful, moving picture of family. I've loved your view of "our" CSI world. You caught Greg perfectly! Grissom and Sara as I wished they could have been - happy here not on some foreign land. And, through it all, Emma - joyful in dance (as, I suspect, are you) and a delight to all who "met" her.

Thanks for sharing one ofyour many talents!

wonderful story

What a wonderful ending to an amazing story! And the epilogue brings things full circle-but with so much hope.

Thank you.

Great story! Loved it!

Wow. Nice ending to a great story! I'm very glad you finished this.

One small thing: One-week-old babies don't giggle. They start smiling at about 5 weeks.

wow!

Started reading this today for the first time... Amazing Job!

I loved the whole thing...

6 years Im betting was worth waiting for :)

Thanks Honor x

i couldnt believe it when I saw in my inbox that this one had finally been finished. One of my favorite fanfics EVER!