| Reviews for Specter |
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MEGAMANX411 chapter 3 . 11/28/2004 Another great fic from you! I love the character interaction and the dialogue...especially X calling Alia "Allie", lol. That's a very good nickname. Please coninue writing. _ |
Myhi chapter 3 . 11/20/2004 UPDATE! I guess the old man is Dr. Wily. I wonder what his and Specter's motives are for sabotauging (I know, I suck at spelling _;) the Hunter Base computers. I can't wait to find out! |
Vincent Hales chapter 2 . 8/3/2003 I like the story so far. It flows well, and it has an underlying plot to it that isn't altogether visible. As some constructive criticism, I'd suggest that you either change your summary of the story so that it _doesn't_ implicate Zero, or make the next chapter what points to him. Either way, the current summary at this point in the story implicates Zero, yet, we've yet to see anything like that... So, it's usually a good idea to keep the juicy tidbits hidden till ya wanna reveal them. Otherwise it kinda spoils the fun of it all. Other than that, I like the story, and you can expect more reviews from me as the story progresses. PS: One good turn deserves another. You reviewed me, I review you. It's the least I can do. |
Dr. Bross chapter 1 . 6/14/2003 Hey not a bad beginning. Good explanations, good descritpions. But short. I don't know if it's because it's a prolouge... But bottom line. Good start, let's see some more. |
Humor News Cast chapter 1 . 6/14/2003 THis looks like it could get pretty interesting. Continue Please! |