| Reviews for Unexpected Child |
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   Calmzone1 chapter 2 . 1/10/2019 Lol. Only Harry could fall into a situation such as this! Weary/wearily...tired Wary/warily...cautious |
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/18/2017 At least you had the decency to kill the Mary Sue. ;) |
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/18/2017 Naw, really? Raptor means bird of prey? You’re shitting me! You don’t need to define the words in your story. Not all of your readers are stupid, and ‘raptor’ isn’t that difficult. |
| ntalcenent chapter 2 . 3/3/2017 *sad-face* I like this fic. Too bad there isn't more of it, so much potential for a great 'feelz' story. |
| Noxy the Proxy chapter 2 . 9/12/2013 This story is somewhat amusing. Please update again. |
| muumi2three chapter 2 . 4/4/2013 That's delightful. Too bad there wasn't a little more of it! |
| moonprincess97524 chapter 2 . 2/10/2012 I love this wonderful story so far. I do hope that you are going to explain the bond that Harry and the little baby seem to share. I do hope that you are able to come back to this again soon. |
| GallagherGirl537 chapter 2 . 10/30/2011 this was good |
| Helga42 chapter 2 . 7/16/2011 Why didn't you continue this story? I like it very much and would have liked a few more chapters! I hope i will find something related among your favorites! See you! |
| Moi chapter 2 . 5/7/2011 Hello! I know you haven't continued this story for years. However, it is absolutely amazing and definitely unique! You really should consider to continue it. Entonces: !un gran PORFAVOOOOOR! Hasta luego, Moi |
| Crazy909 chapter 2 . 4/11/2011 Continue? Please, it's an awesome story... crazy |
| VestriVerum chapter 1 . 4/5/2010 Interesting story, and while there are some punctuation mistakes, I don't think it's that bad. You might want to stop using apostrophes for everytime you say 'The Boy Who Lived'. Hyphens aren't needed either. Also, you might want to just refer to him as Harry at times - the use of the term, 'The Boy Who Lived', seems a bit overdone. Apart from that, I'll be looking forward to see how this story goes, if it does continue. ~V. |
| irezel chapter 2 . 6/21/2009 hahah, awesome! you write very well for english not being your first language! i really like this story, it is extremely interesting! snape has a daughter...weird...:P :) i wish you'd continue...but oh well...:) |
| Heksie chapter 2 . 12/21/2008 Well i do want to see snapes reaction... |
| HappeeGoLuckee chapter 2 . 2/10/2008 I like this. Will there be more? |
