Great story... Just wondering why you never finished it. Oh well, I'll be eagerly awaiting the rest of it, should you choose to ever finish it.

love this please update soon

The blue mutant grinned devilishly from his perch. “Aw, you’re just grumpy because you nearly lost to a squirrel…”

“I’m missing Kitty in her bathing suit for this, so you better listen,” he exclaimed with mock severity.

Scott crossed his arms, preparing for the worst, but gave the younger mutant his full attention. “Alright, I’m listening. But like I said, it’s your own fault you’re waxing the X-Jet instead of goofing off with the others.”

“Dude, it’s a two-piece! Have you no heart?”

*giggles*

OMG, this is hilarious! I can't stop laughing & I've only read 1 chapter! Kurt's so funny, I LOVE how you've written his character! It's EXACTLY how he is!

HAHAHAHAHA!A GIANT fire breathing armored squirrel! Ah! *heart attack from laughing to hard* Kurtty Rocks! Bad Amanda and Lance Bad! Sorry to anyone who likes those

up date!1

This story gives an insight into their lives outside fighting, training, etc. Very good!

Especially Kurt and his German referances! But here's one insult for you:

Dein Idiotisch leer-kopften Arschlosch!

And one compliment for a woman:

Dein ist strahlend...

Ok? Gute liebe nach dem nachste Kapitel, mein lieblingsSchriftsteller!

Heh heh. I like this story.

first things first, let me just say that this is a totally wonderful, amusing and well-written story. It's been on my Favorites List and you've been on my favorite authors list for, like, ever...*sighs* but, you haven't updated in...well, it feels like millenia when you're waitin' for a story to finish... :)
oh, I have to say I love the little reference things at the bottom of each chapter. Well, I had remembered the little fake romance novel that you did in this chapter...I was at my local multimedia store the other day, and there was a DVD called 'Wings of Passion'...believe it or not, but I totally freaked out! *grins* my dad came to pick me up and I was chattering a mile a minute about how I'd found something real from your story and he just gave me that patented crazy look...which made me think of your story even more...so it all ended up being a 40-something guy trying to get his hysterically laughing trenchcoat wearing daughter out of the mall...*sighs* sorry to babble on and on, but I couldn't wait to tell you about that, and I really am begging for an update...I'll give you a...well, the only thing I have in my pocket is 30 cents...but I'm sure I can dig something else up to bribe you with...chocolate, perhaps? *grins*
have a nice day
Iri

Great fic! You are definetly one of the best Evo writers on . Please email me when you update!

Thanks!
-Elie

'ello,'ello,'ello

I have this story on my Favorites List. I was rereading said list and reread this story with the new chapter...SO funny! Love the Kurrty undertones! heehee send 'em a toilet seat! that'd be hilarious...

um, just one slight question...well, more of a comment...the tides are actually pretty predictable, I mean, you can buy tide tables at most stores and stuff on the coast...just wanted to mention.

but I love this story so please continue in all haste! :)

NO! How could you stop!

"... In unison, they all looked disbelievingly down at their drink glasses for a moment, then back at him." For a second there, I thought his watch wasn't working. Oh well, keep going!

Woah... it sure cheers yer up, doesn't it? Thanks for putting in translations for the German bits, some things I've read here don't have translations...:P

quote: ~“…her hair…lay loose about her shoulders in thick, abundant auburn waves.” : For those of you who haven’t seen the original Kitty, you don’t know what you’re missing. Her hair is so freakin’ gorgeous! (Of course, she’s drawn that way, but that’s beside the point.) I’ll gladly send a pic to any of you who should so request!~ unquote

So, can I have one? Pretty Please?

My addy is

well, here it comes...

MORE CHAPPIES PLEASE!

hey, this is a wicked funny fic, i loved the first chappy! PLZ update soon!

XOXO,

Christa

hey! i really didn't read this yet! wow, do i ever take a while to clue in.

hehe, kurt's naivete about kitty's book was so cute, as was his discovery, hehe. kitty really should have known better. and that whole scene between them was wonderful. hehe, loved his response to the bite me remark.

'spiffed out' ya cool expressions!

oh ya, girls need to make an entrance. i want a big spiffy staircase to make my entrances from. okay, maybe i don't have an entrances to make, but i could one day! and kurt closing bobby's mouth with his tail was genial. and kurt took pity on poor sam and his inability to flail fast enough, hehe. heh, shindig, i've been using that word all week.

'now, play nice and don't get too smashed mein freund' ah, party advice to live by, hehe.

go boxer clad football guy! whoot! 'party on, dude!' i'm sensing a waynes world moment? ya dancing bribe! parties are so good. and man, kurti sure does have a potty mouth in this, but whatever, not complaining. oh, and opa's brushes are Nutter's, me and Lee just ripped them off. ripping off is fun.