It was a fantastic story until the end. There was a lot of real situations, great characterization, and genuine conflict, but it ended on a cliche that undid everything it was building up to.

Okay, best chap so far. :)

Dang, got me crying, for real too.

that was a wonderful story. and i truly mean it.

Awesome fic! I think you did a great job with this and I hope to read more from you soon!

Interesting story and all, but the end was a serious cop-out. The story was an emotional roller-coaster... and then it was all a dream! C'mon! You could've done better than that! Terrible ending.

I am proud of you for writing this. Anda I don't even know you!

But is a great fanfiction work, you should be proud.

Awesome plot! love it!

God. Despite the fact that I hate things that turn out to be dreams, I loved this story. I've spent the past two days consumed by it. Good job.

Best Wishes

Wow. That was . . .interesting. A dream. Hm. Good write though.

an amazing story to say the least. im a tad dissapointed by the ending. for one, dream sequence endings, in all honestly, suck. and in my opinion, so do suicide endings. i feel incredioubly disapointed that all those chapters never even happened. i think that an author with your skills and talent could have some how rapped up the story ending in yusuke and kurama without suicide/dream sequence.

omg... haha, that's amazing! you really had me going, too, i was crying and bawling like a baby... well, not bawling, really, "leaking a few tears" haha .

great fic! i love it! . thanks so much!

*~tsukiko~*

You are one sadistic author. So mean. I was seriously going to be pissed off if you ended this with something stupid, like Kurama dying. But since this became a dream sequence, I guess it's fine (albeit, a bit cruel -now I want to know the true story-).

I really like it. It's very good. I like the ending. I wasn't expecting it.

this was a good story, you had me in tears over yusuke's growing love for kurama for most of the story. however although the ending chapter was good, i have to say i really dont like the it all turned out to be a dream concept.

you could have kept yusuke and kurama together another way or let yusuke be heartbroken and then do a sequel where he finds love, you could even have had hiei and yusuke share hiei or a complete threesome.