You're chapters need to be longer and things need to be described more but I like it so far ]

Alandra: nice fic so far.

Ramon: about your review, yes we know that we give some errors, and we also use Microsoft word for the spelling errors, and most of all we are portuguese, english isnt our main word and are working very hard to make our fics has perfect has we can, I hope you'll understand this.

Sunny: what gonna happend next?

Oh... So there is two chapters... ;;

Anyways, its getting interesting... Keep writing. Still need to know what happens next. lol

Ja-ne!

~Morbid E.

Ah, hoi hoi. WoW! Very good! Whee! Yet, very short chapters. Hm... But its all good anyways. -nods head a few times-

How many chapters did you write now? ;; Aheh, heh.

Continue on with the story. I want to read more...What happens next?

hi hi, me is reviewing you back since you reviewed my yugioh story! me updated it, but first congrats to your story...it's ok if it's short, it happens to everyone. good luck with continuing, i review back later! _

-icy angelwings X_X

great job keep it up and i won't send an inu on u

I'm intrigued...can't wait to read more!

Make the chapters longer... please?

hey, another good story so far. Keep writing it. and thanks for reviewing my story, I am going to write more chappies..but I don't have any ideas, and I might just change it to just an Inuyasha fic. Ok, well thanks again

Aiko

keep goin!