this was just mind bending. i loved it!

I just love Integra in full action. She's so amazing. hahaha

Whoo. That was an awesome fight scene! I especially loved the twist in the end. Hahaha. Integra's cool.

And this story is hot.

Nice little fikkie. Especially liked the ending with it's bit o' sexual tension. 3

I frickin' love this! It is so wicked. I read this fanfic before, then I lost it and I have been searching like mad to re-discover it again. I found it! Yes! I love the changing of the roles, between Master and Monster, Hunter and the Hunted. Yummy in my tummy. Okay I am high on caffine so something good-but seriously, I love this. Please write more.

Ta,

The Watcher

Or simply Immortalis

Kink...so damned kinky...I think the capillaries in my cheeks just gave out. Hell, this was so sexy. I love that he could quite easily made her a vampire there and then, but he was honest. I also like the subtle hints that, although he wants to change her, it's not all about that. It's like he wants her to want to be something better. It's very cool, and subtle and stuff. Loving your work. Write more! XD

I REALLY LIKE THIS STORY AND ALL OF THE OTHER ONES ON HERE BUT YOU NEVER PUT ANY ONES THE SHAIR MORE FEELINGS BETWEEN SERAS AND ALUCARD IF U KNOW WUT I MEAN. PS DO U THING ALUCARD IS REAL OR NOT AND HOW DARE PEO[LE CALL HIM A BASTARD I DON,T LIKE THAT AT ALL (~_~)

Loved the irony! A very well-rounded story in all aspects.

What? You haven't read nor watched Hellsing and yet came up with such a great story? That was fantastic. By the way, an image conjured in my head after reading your fic. I credited you in already. It's here :

how about you put vincent valentine as alucard's son. make integra his mom but make it like some sort of mystery so that people try to find who his mother is! the story is great! just think about this review please!

Wonderful! Excellent battle descriptions and you were what I consider highly IC. It is true, Integra would absolutely not submit to Alucard, but she would bow to standards she had set herself. Alucard is fair, rather, and wouldn't have taken advantage of the situation, considering she had, in all honesty, won.

ok, aside from the fact that integra (spelling: INTEGRA) seemed a bit ooc in the rash decision to risk her mortality in such a way, It was perfect! Absolutely! You characterized Alucard wonderfully! I love the fact she hit him right off, and the whole ordeal lasted less than a minute. I think this is the perfect hellsing fanfiction, considering your insights into both characters were so on target. "Alucard's idea of love is challenge." That is undenyably true, it shocked me somewhat when you stated it so simply. But yes, and I do agree with the way you placed the atmosphere and the interaction between the two. They may be 'kindred spirits' so to speak, but neither would ever act on it, because that would involve giving some ground, and that goes against everything in both of their characters. The fact that Alucard offers Integra his blood so freely just shows that he knows she would never ask and wants it badly enough to give some ground, or he's rather reckless about who he gives it too, could be either depending on your opinion of Seras. I cant wait to read even more of your work, hopefully some with chapters, this was short but any more unnecessary length would have ruined it.

Flawless

This has got to be the most beautifuly written and amazingly creative fan fics I have ever read. The story is so vivid! It's like I can see the scenes playing out in my head!
I seriously wanted, still want, to make this into an animated short, but I have not the time nor the equiptment... nor the copyright for that matter.
The only thing, the ONLY little thing that bothers me though is the opening scene where Integra is killing/torturing a ghoul. She dosn't seem like a sadist, yes she rags on Alucard but that's only to keep him under control. that would be the only thing I'd change but hey, it's your story, keep up the great work!

i loved it! i love the way you ended it!

Awesome. Awesome. I now have to read all you your fics.