So well written loved it!

just skipping through the archives when I came upon this story...just smiled throughout...made me long for the days of more-visible GSR...simply a great read...thanks for posting this story...

fantastic!

Loved it

I hope there are more chapters to come...this is really good and i cant wait for more!

Holy Cow BATMAN!

i loved the kiss part, wish it really would happen like that. it would make a terrific episode.

Loved it...Have enjoyed all of your stories and am eagerly awaiting more of Innocence and Beauty and Wide As the Ocean Is.

WOW. Great story. I think you got the characters down right.

this was SO wonderful, I *loved* it!

now, who do I have to kill so TIIC actually *film* this?

I loved it! I would have paid good money to see this on Strip Stranger, but we had to settle for Grissom just touching her as they walked.

You are right that it all boils down to risk, and he's not going to do anything until he faces a bigger risk.

Great dialogue and just the right mix of exposition.

I LOVE IT! I hope you will consider extending the story.

This is cool. I really liked the part about Sara killing Gris. There was just enough oocness to make it perfect. I always though Gris acted a little ooc with Sara at times. Please continue this. It is really good.

Loved it! This is your first CSI fic? *Definitely* shouldn't be your last. Right-on characterization and a great buildup of tension! Absolutely love Sara's reaction at the end. Looking forward to more of your work soon.

I haven't read a Strip Strangler fic in awhile... this one was fantastic! I loved the rest of the teams' reactions to Sara's and Grissom's arguing, and the ending was great, too.

I hope to see some more of your writing soon! :)

Oh Wow! Please let CBS hire you! This was excellent!