this is another one of those stories i put in their own little catergory...a story that is so beautiful it can almost be considered poetry, a story that flows from word to word letting loose unbrideled passion in the hearts of man, a story that gives you a sense of deep satisfaction when your done with it, i loved it and i applaued you skills.

Well...that's depressing. Well written, but depressing. Your writing format added to it. Well done.

Rae, I cant believe I barely read this now! I must have skipped it when I read your other stories. But I LOVE this one...actually I love all your stories dont I? *sigh* Anyways this one was WAY different than anything else Ive read. The story is even better when you imagine Edward Scissorhands music in the backround. Well Im babbling so long story short, awesometastic story.

That was good! I liked it! It was interesting because he doesn't often think in the book about the things that might have been. I'm not a big fan of slash but it was a good transition into to that part of his thoughts. It wasn't graphic or too sexual to the point that it was unbelievable it was a smooth transition. I'd like to hear him feel more of the boy under the stairs feelings, not a lot more, but maybe a little more about him, we all know about him, but maybe you could show that Harry can feel him there. A little more descriptive in that paragraph, about the little boy in his dreams.

awesome story. Your a great writer _

Things I liked about this: The concept. The mood evoked in the first and last paragraphs. The way Harry’s thoughts were expressed. It sounded like his voice would sound, his phrasing. And the way the thoughts sometimes stop and change—just like they would if you were creating a dream world in that state—you would occasionally start something and realize it wasn’t right and change it..

I really liked the feeling of escape, of manufacturing your own reality. That half wake/half sleep stage is the most intense time. I really think it is where we would all live permanently if we could. Sleep gives us dreams—which may or may not be what we want. Wake gives us reality, which is seldom what we want.

My very favorite line in here, the one that just made me go “ah” is: “The window is shimmering silver, like the soft hair between your fingers…”

This was very well written and I enjoyed reading it from the first word to the last.

Hey Rae!

I really liked this. It was different, and not usually what I read on this site.

Brilliant ficlet, well done

Luv Nikki xox

I've read this one before, but I didn't know how to review anything *blushes* because I was stupid like that, but I read it again and here I am, reviewing. I love how you completely change things around. It isn't something that you see often and change is sometimes good - in moderation. There is a strange sense of "loss" of what is going on and it pressed me to read it. (not like it was hard...it was quite short, but good) You don't really know what is going on and I liked it that way. Sometimes the more confusing they are, the better.

Love ya,

Keep slashing,

Amber

That was scary in a way. Very good but scary. Lovely descrptions, though.

i like the idea here, the style of this - how it is telling the story - i especially like the last sentence