Thanks.

in love with this story hope you continue to update it and fuck all the haters they talk shit all they want but never even once attempted to right a single story of any sort.

Thank you.
So... no Kushina or Mikoto? I know they're (most probably) dead in this story too, but you're planning to bring or go to others from across dimensions, so it's not THAT far fetched.
And please consider Kurenai, Mei Terumi and Kaguya.
Also, when you get to Power Girl, maybe have other versions of her too? Like Supergirl, Divine & Galatea.
Please keep up the good work.

i have opinion take shizuka samui ah and yugito and fuu too. sure they'er also jinchuriki too. can't. wait read they do it with their biju mode muehehe...

ah and kurenai why not. i mean i don't know just to think this the duo can't be separate whenever author on this fandom set harem they always put together in harem list

Good story

Love it keep up the amazing work

Harem
Star fire
Reven
Supergirl
Talia
Miss martian

Well loved the chapter hope to see the next chapter updated soon. But I really hope you make Tsume and Hana a permanent addition to the harem and not just an omake. But again it is your choice also love that you put Samui in the harem she is one of my favorite girls to pair with Naruto.

good chapter.
sasuke and sakura are assholes, hope they will obtain what they deserve.
Also, hot smut, but hope you will plan true bdsm kink, with naruto tied in harness, leather cuffs and gag, and the girls using toys on him (like chastity, vibrator, strap-on, nipple play, torture-play, etc)

good job

I do not know about having Shizune, Ino and Fem Kurama included. I am not a big fan of Shizune and Fem Kurama and Ino is Sasukes 2nd biggest fangirl. Though I am glad you added She-Hulk and Samui. Should be interesting what will happen next. I like how your story is mostly hentai but with some story update soon

don't listen to the idiots like mcgree this is your story you type write the way you like love it

this is one of the best stories on this website naruto can be cowering in fear saying that he has no sperm left

To add on to my previous review, I'll also comment on your authors note on chapter 3. You told an angry reviewer to 'grow up'.

After reading both his review and your response to him, I'll say this. You both need to grow up. You aren't writing this story on some whim. You're writing it because you want people to enjoy it, pretending otherwise is useless.

There will be people who dislike your stories, learn to ignore it or improve your writings otherwise every chapter will have you immaturely responding to everyone who left a negative review.

Personally, I didn't so much dislike the story but instead found myself bored with it, so this is the end from me. I won't be reading further so it doesn't really matter if you respond to me in your next chapter as I won't see it.

If you want valid criticism then here it is...

Authors who use unnecessary character bashing in stories are terrible writers. It shows that you aren't mature enough to set aside personal feelings to accurately display an authentic characterization of someone.

It also causes the story to feel forced.

There are better ways to get around making a character look bad besides just giving them an OC personality.