That was really good. I like the way they had started the whole Cole thing. Very nice. But, Cole really isn't that disrespectful. He is a bad boy, but not so, how to say it, rude. He is more of a sweet bad guy, you know? You werote a lot of stories...

you should write more!but if not its was good

This story was very interesting. What did the Triad have in his hand?

yeah, i suppose it was good. better then what i could ever write!

Hmmm...I think this is going to be good! What exavtly was the eldest holding. And what exactly are the triad?

good

That was great. Cole/Balthazar is my favorite new character. I don't remember them doing this on the show and I am glad you did. Can't wait to read more of your work!