oh this was really good i hope you do a sequel!

very nice

Wonderfull!

Very good! Loved it.

I'm not particularly active on this site anymore, but this story is exactly why I browse the catalog every so often - a real gem might pop up. Great work, dude. I hope you'll make more. And don't sell yourself short, this is your creation and you should be proud of it.

This was a wonderful story. You did an excellent job with it. And thank you for your kind words. Keep up the good work!