Sweet.

Man. I cried. A lot. More than I would care to admit actually. This story was well written and beautifully told. My heart aches for them as if this was an actual event in history that I didnt get to witness. Please never stop writing.

they need more chapters to this story

I am absolutely speechless and literally in tears. This story was remarkable in all ways; it broke my heart, made me laugh, and so much more. Brilliant plot and I am so glad to have stumbled across it. Thank you for your work.

Sorry. I loved it. It's just such a sad ending.

HOW COULD YOU DO THIS?!

BUT I CRIED BUCKETS!

Love it!

nun nmm

WHY this history is all underlined? i can't read it in that way, sorry.

If this was real, I will buy a book, and an audio book of this, and all the merchandise that I can, and the video games, and the cellphone games, and the.. everything! I also want a selfie and getting you to be my friend! I love your story. But how dare you make me cry.. is victory too sweet for such a price to be paid?

How dare you make me cry.

It's all underlined... hard to read when it's all underlined...

damn, you're sadistic! Wonderful, but sadistic. As if the whole story wasn't painful, the ending extremely so, but you also have to add an even more painful epilogue.. I thought that the whole story was about hope. Nope.. it wasn't! It was about the damn lack of it. In the end she even win a one way ticket to hell. Forever away from those she loved. And that poor guy who saw her die twice? What the hell? Of course his heart could not take it again. And they won't EVER be together! But in spite of all that disaster.. the story was really wonderful. Aaaaand, you made ME cry buckets. Damn.. is there a sequel or something, cause I still have some tissues. Hope it's not going to be as sadistic as this story, maybe some gods who will grant her forgiveness and a place in heaven? She sacrificed herself, after all.

I have never cried so much before in my life!