| Reviews for The Hero Knight and the Spartan Dork |
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   MadTitan9 chapter 2 . 6h Erm... Professor Peach is another female instructor at Beacon. We've just never seen her. |
| memefarius chapter 2 . 7h Yeaaa |
| Iwr1918 chapter 2 . 8h I liked the first chapter better but this was still good. I feel like the interaction between pyrrha jaune and weiss could have been better - she seemed a little out of character, but i guess thats part of the premise? Her openly teasing weiss was strange for someone who is shy and didnt have many friends. That said, again, still a good read and these are just the introductory chapters anyways. |
| Polaris north chapter 2 . 8h Lmao this chapter was hilarious and adorable |
| LuckyPickl3 chapter 2 . 11h This chapter is nicely done and good job on the omake it's really funny |
| TheSlySage chapter 1 . 8/4 this concept is soo awesome! looking forward to more. and if you are looking for a community of writers and readers pm me we got a discord server that we are growing... currently 17 strong! |
| Gentleman Genius chapter 1 . 8/3 off to a great start, kid. Im looking forward to future chapters and I hope you start other projects! |
| Lloyd RPGFan chapter 1 . 8/2 Definitely a story worthy of more chapters. |
| Therecklessone chapter 1 . 7/31 SUCH. UNLIMITED. POTENTIAL. I can see it now, poor Jaune obligated to uphold his family's legacy and earn sponsorships and rewards to provide for his seven sister. That would be a fun conversation. "Hey your from Argus? My older sister Saph lives up there with her wife and my nephew." Will his weapons be anything like Volume 7, Combining to become a claymore and creating Felix styled force fields? I would say keep the semblances the same. So what is the older sister's name. I'm hoping Carol(ina) and her cute little brother Leo(nard). Excellent start. I look forward to where this goes. |
| Iwr1918 chapter 1 . 8/2 interesting concept and well written. hopefully it remains that way as we see more interaction between pyrrha and jaune. looking forward to this one! |
| LuckyPickl3 chapter 1 . 8/1 I like the idea of role reversal and good to see pyrrha still has that apologizing attitude in your story to hahaha |
| memefarius chapter 1 . 8/1 Nice, i ll be waiting for updates |
| GlitchWarrior chapter 1 . 7/31 This is a bit of a twist, reversing the roles of both a prodigy and a fail master. Interesting. Following this one for sure! |
| Polaris north chapter 1 . 7/31 I like the concept and it was well written and easy to follow. Can't wait for the next |
| Zerg97 chapter 1 . 7/31 Yes, poor Weiss. Not a bad start, I hope the robot will overcome the threshold of 2-3 chapters. The last robot I read about Pyrrha-Jones' interchangeable roles was a Persian. I hope you can complete it to the end. Good luck ! |
