The are adorable together. Neither of them wanted that date to end.

I am sending this hoping it will be to late to delete. I am loving all of the chapters so far, even the commentary. I like learning about the writers that make me love the ins and outs of the subjects. Puts some charm to the chapters. I love to read and since I don't have the talent to write this addssovery much too the story's I love.

Oh goodness. It's the same as ch. 13 which was a good ch. Thank you.

Saying good night after their first real date is hard. Christian and Ana need to find some every day normalcy in their relationship before they can make it permanent.

Helping Ana tidy the kids' room at their beautiful cottage, Christian is ready to buy them a house on the Sound! Wait until the Nooz gets a load of their night out at Mia's restaurant.

Why does Ray want a DNA test? Since Carrick wants one, too, I guess it is settled. Dinner Saturday night? These two are moving right along.

Kids are so funny over the phone. Seems like Ted and Phoebe trust Christian already. Carrick wants a DNA test? So does Ray! That's too funny.

Yes, grocery shopping with two small children! Maybe a nice weekend in the Grace will tire those babies out! Oh, oh. The Nooz caught some pretty good photos. This could be a good thing.

Luke Sawyer, Nanny! Christian is already committed to Ana and his little kids. I wonder if they have a glimmer that Christian is their Daddy?

What beautiful kids. Give credit to Ana. But now Christian is ready to be a father.

As stunned as they both are, Chrisyian and Ana wanted to see each other again, but could not locate each other. Twins! And Teddy is unwell?

Small world, Christian. I wonder who Ted is? Scratching my head!

Mia successful and hard working and only 19! I like successful Mia. Gee, I wonder who the young designer could be

Great start. Love your storyline of a young, very successful and lonely Christian.

Got an email about chapter 14. I went to read it but its not there. Where did it go ?