OK, nitpicking here. You made it seem as if it hadn't been too long since leaving King's Cross that Harry saw storm clouds. It wouldn't make any sense to take care of them at that point as they had to go from London all the way to Northern Scotland (about a 7 hour ride aka JKR). You could have huge storm clouds in one place and nothing but sunny skies just 20 miles away. I like that you put Ginny and Neville together, even though they are only 13 and 14.

A TV in Grimmauld Place wouldn't work due to the magic in the house. The house wouldn't have a TV in the first place. Did Sirius go buy it?
How would Daphne know about a report on a muggle TV station from Hogwarts? Who would she even get that information from? No one she knows would watch the news and no one could get the news to her that quickly.
I love an overpowered/Super Harry, but I have to laugh when you say he's not going to be SuperHarry and then completely obliterates an island. What island? Where did he go? How did he get there? How did he explode? These are things you need to show in the story. Maybe show Harry struggling to rein in his power or something. Otherwise it just seems silly.

Great story! I liked how you characterized Daphne, Tracy, and Blaise. I didn't like how you characterized Hermione, however I noticed several authors have done this too. Keep up the good work, and I can't wait for the next chapter!

You have to decide. either you are saying there is no Dark and Light Magic and it is just the label given by those who want to control people or there is Dark and Light Magic and you show the ritual with a percentage of how dark or light or gray someone is. you can't have it both ways.

I have a question. Charles mentions the war with Grindlewald going on. That war ended in 1945 or thereabouts. The date of Charles is 1959.

This is a good story. However I hope Harry and Daphne can become friends again. Perhaps after Potter gets answers about those six seats. Perhaps Hermione and Daphne and possibly Neville will realize and believe Harry did not could not would not put his name into the goblet.

Interesting story i like how you are going but more character development would be nice.

Nice chapter, i can't wait for when Harry explains everything to Daphne and his other slytherin friends. And somehow i think old Dumbles is gonna blow everything massively out of proportion and cause some issues as well (personally I'd not mind a dumbles bashing in the story, i personally don't like him at all)

is already adding excuses to weaken Harry, it is unnecessary because there is always someone more powerful just take advantage of the other magical communities that use scepters, jewelry
or something else, as long as they're not crutches so you can get stronger magic users from other communities that don't follow Merlin
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An interesting story, and I'd love to hear where you got the idea for the Shadow Warp power if you're willing. Can't wait to see what happens when Harry protects her from her father publicly as well as the confrontation between the "golden trio" about his friends in the pit, who actually know about a couple of his abilities...actually I'm curious what ron or hermione will do if they find out...and this has turned into less lf a review and more a rant my bad

Loving the story! Can’t wait too see what happens next!

Off to an interesting start! But how did Vernon know to drop him off there?

Why is it a necessity in just about every Harry 'takes control fic' for him to mention he could have been in Slytherin. KMT it's cringy, unnecessary and beyond annoying.

Really good story so far! Looking forward to what you’re gunna do with the tournament!

loving the story so far