Nice one...
Happy birthday nikita,,:))

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I m just speechless... what a great one shot... perfectly described each and every thing... daya ka prank... karan his supporter in prank... abhi attempting suicide... acp concern towards both... team efforts to make daya happy.. then suddenly abhi's mission... his disappearance... abhi in danger... fir daya ka prank ka khulna...acp sir ka gussaa... that coffin and abhi's weak body... shock after listening that hum nhi bacha skte usse... daya's confession about his prank... abhi's movement... and his last words.. and then deadth... *sniff *sniff... I thought really abhi is no more... then came to know ohh it was daya's dream... daya aggressive nature... and that duo hug... and yes bechara karan... hahahaaa... it's just amazing... loved it... update more on duo...

First of all thank you soooooooooooooooo much for this lovely gift. A Tight hug to you.
It was a just amazing story. Even I too can't write like this. What am amazing concept! Love you.

Kha bathHy

Wow.. wow... wow .. it’s an awesomely awesome OS di ..

Kya story hai .. I just loved it .. it’s truly an amazing work ..

It’s an outstanding story di .. I just loved it.. hats off to you..

Ye kya tha dear...I mean iss One shot mein aapnekitna kuch describe kar diya..The beginning, then shock which Daya sir played "That he has only one week to survive"...then Abhi sir suicide Attempt ...OMG! thank god Acp sir sahi time par aa gaye...then the way Acp sir tried to console Abhi sir n made him understand to accept the reality...n Abhi sir tears...its just amazingly described dear...Then Acp sir - Dcp convo...light convo..but then sudden u revealed abt Abhi sir went to a mission which was extremely dangerous ...very shocking...then Daya sir revealation abt his lie, Acp sir tension, Abhi sir condition ...n his death, Daya sir condition...again a very shocking...yet extremely painful...n then the most shocking part, ki ye sapna tha ...bechara karan..hahahaha...then the bestest part..duo cute hug...It like roller coaster, that to in s aingle chapter story ...Its Amazing, Superb, n wonderful OS dear...Keep writing always...Take care...
Happy Birthday to my Nikku

This really was a deserving story for a review...
Outstanding chapter dear... A really different concept... Loved it that u kept it pure duo.

Nice dear